Monday, April 24, 2017

Partners in Poetry--ayaz daryl nielsen and Peggy Dugan French, United States

can’t turn away
By ayaz daryl nielsen and Peggy Dugan French, United States

things will blend together, as they do
you can’t turn away
new beginnings approaching
true Spring has yet to set in
your memory returns with the iris
endowing and inhabiting
I smile at the thought of us…
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27 comments:

  1. Jo BalistreriApril 24, 2017 at 8:16 PM

    What gorgeous words of hope--you can't turn away/new beginnings approaching...
    It's true memory does return with spring green, the iris, the delicacy of buds and lacy leaves. Even the air is sweet.
    I like " I smile at the thought of us...am smiling at the thought of you ayaz and you Peggy.
    Thank you. Thank you.

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    1. pdfrenchApril 25, 2017 at 7:44 AM

      Thank you so much Jo for your kind words! I am so glad you enoyed the piece so much, it is great inspirration to read your words! Thank You!

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    2. AnonymousApril 25, 2017 at 9:54 PM

      luv ya, Jo...

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  2. UnknownApril 24, 2017 at 10:11 PM

    Dear Daryl & Peggy,
    Spoken truth, Neatly and nicely said.
    Love it.
    Yancy

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    1. pdfrenchApril 25, 2017 at 7:44 AM

      Thank you Yancy, I am so glad you enjoyed the piece so much!

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    2. UnknownApril 25, 2017 at 9:02 AM

      I'm sure happy to be a part of Whispers with
      writers like you two in it. Wow! such
      greatness in colaboration
      Yancy

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    3. pdfrenchApril 25, 2017 at 2:51 PM

      Thank you Yancy!

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    4. AnonymousApril 25, 2017 at 9:57 PM

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    5. AnonymousApril 25, 2017 at 9:58 PM

      whoops...

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    6. AnonymousApril 25, 2017 at 10:04 PM

      three cheers for Yancy! and three more!

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    7. UnknownApril 25, 2017 at 11:42 PM

      Your welcome and also thanks, Ayaz or Daryl.
      Which name do you like to go by? I like
      your humor and style.
      Yancy

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  3. AnonymousApril 24, 2017 at 11:00 PM

    Lovely little Gem ! Small Is Beautiful! Thanks for sharing your words. Keith , UK.

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    1. pdfrenchApril 25, 2017 at 7:45 AM

      Thank you for responding Keith, so glad you liked it!

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    2. AnonymousApril 25, 2017 at 9:58 PM

      hooray for Keith!

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  4. Lotus2009April 25, 2017 at 12:41 AM

    A beautiful collaboration with a superb ending! Aloha, Connie

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    1. pdfrenchApril 25, 2017 at 7:45 AM

      Thank you so much Connie for your kind words, so glad you enjoyed the piece.

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    2. AnonymousApril 25, 2017 at 9:59 PM

      deeply appreciated!

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  5. Gert W. KnopApril 25, 2017 at 7:45 AM

    Great collaboration Daryl & Peggy. Thank you for sharing it with us.

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  6. UnknownApril 25, 2017 at 8:00 AM

    Dear Peggy and ayaz,
    Thank you for this gentle poem so full of tenderness brought on by the season.
    Blessings,
    Michael

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    1. pdfrenchApril 25, 2017 at 2:51 PM

      Thank you for publishing the work Michael!

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    2. AnonymousApril 25, 2017 at 10:00 PM

      Michael,you be among the best!

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  7. Daginne AignendApril 25, 2017 at 10:55 AM

    Less is more. It sure is for this lovely poem

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    1. pdfrenchApril 25, 2017 at 2:52 PM

      Thank yo Daginne, much appreciated!

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    2. AnonymousApril 25, 2017 at 10:01 PM

      had a relative from the old country named Daginne!

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  8. David FoxApril 29, 2017 at 12:34 PM

    Ayaz and Peggy,
    A wonderful collaboration. I enjoyed it very much.
    Yours truly,
    David Fox

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