tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post1407099710961698469..comments2023-10-31T19:20:19.643-07:00Comments on Whispers... : That’s Why Roses Die--By Gerald Heyder--United StatesKaren O'Learyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10510849199110347270noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-30534309079429989572013-11-02T14:36:07.508-07:002013-11-02T14:36:07.508-07:00Thank you for the comments for Gerald. I will sen...Thank you for the comments for Gerald. I will send them by mail to him. Gerald, this is one of the best poems I've read by you. The emotion flows through your words. Thank you sharing your talent and for being a part of Whispers.<br /><br />Blessings,<br />KarenKaren O'Learyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10510849199110347270noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-30594850246423033032013-10-28T17:30:56.503-07:002013-10-28T17:30:56.503-07:00good poem by gerald heyder.
simple,very lyrical an...good poem by gerald heyder.<br />simple,very lyrical and romantic.<br />one thing: to "tighten" it more with the use of symbolism,<br />i would change the line "yes, you can set it free" with<br />"please my love come water me"<br /><br />arthur c. ford,sr.,poet/editorAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12750450098202090296noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-25039724819114009452013-10-09T13:52:46.379-07:002013-10-09T13:52:46.379-07:00Hello Gerald. So nice to see your work here at Wh...Hello Gerald. So nice to see your work here at Whispers. You always write about the most wonderful topics. This is really a nice one, as I have come to expect from you. Blessings!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com