tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post1627849687898640150..comments2023-10-31T19:20:19.643-07:00Comments on Whispers... : Partners in Poetry--By Keith Dodrill--England and Hifsa Ashraf--Pakistan Karen O'Learyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10510849199110347270noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-5719271040796707772017-04-04T04:50:01.589-07:002017-04-04T04:50:01.589-07:00thanks for these lovely words of encouragement!
bl...thanks for these lovely words of encouragement!<br />bless you!Hifsa Ashrafhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11354535882799868545noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-32298968620018781572017-04-04T04:49:01.822-07:002017-04-04T04:49:01.822-07:00thank you!thank you!Hifsa Ashrafhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11354535882799868545noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-17139864650761873732017-04-04T04:48:20.667-07:002017-04-04T04:48:20.667-07:00thank you!thank you!Hifsa Ashrafhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11354535882799868545noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-41801832072946455112017-04-04T04:47:57.976-07:002017-04-04T04:47:57.976-07:00Thank you so much Karen for the great encouragemen...Thank you so much Karen for the great encouragement! <br />Hifsa Ashrafhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11354535882799868545noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-69696639249182164022017-04-04T04:45:45.156-07:002017-04-04T04:45:45.156-07:00Thank you so much!Thank you so much!Hifsa Ashrafhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11354535882799868545noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-14636222321954481482017-04-04T04:45:11.814-07:002017-04-04T04:45:11.814-07:00thanks for your lovely comments!thanks for your lovely comments!Hifsa Ashrafhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11354535882799868545noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-22954244861416211982017-04-04T04:44:31.986-07:002017-04-04T04:44:31.986-07:00Thank you very much sir! Thank you very much sir! Hifsa Ashrafhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11354535882799868545noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-31524738054318415062017-04-01T18:14:38.695-07:002017-04-01T18:14:38.695-07:00Very lyrical and enjoyable! Welcome to Whispers!Very lyrical and enjoyable! Welcome to Whispers!Arthur Turfahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03213927440136641022noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-44606650619670509422017-03-29T18:19:37.838-07:002017-03-29T18:19:37.838-07:00Thanks for taking the time to read + comment on ou...Thanks for taking the time to read + comment on our work. So glad you liked our poem. And thanks for the welcome, Charlene , Keith.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-35386077599957621272017-03-26T19:25:44.877-07:002017-03-26T19:25:44.877-07:00Thank you, Isha, for the following--
Dear Karen:
...Thank you, Isha, for the following--<br /><br />Dear Karen:<br /><br />Such a poem of yearning. Oh, such yearning. Beautifully written in exquisite wordage. These two poets have collaborated so well and one hopes they will continue. A pleasure to read.<br /><br />Yours sincerely<br />Isha WagnerKaren O'Learyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02169168444862156783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-90041090642516225932017-03-24T07:30:40.210-07:002017-03-24T07:30:40.210-07:00There is captivating and metaphorical beauty in th...There is captivating and metaphorical beauty in this co-write. Well done Keith and Hifsa for this seamless collaboration. Regards // paulpaul callushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03414808197259322785noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-45010454025940851562017-03-23T20:47:11.960-07:002017-03-23T20:47:11.960-07:00I really enjoyed your well written collaboration K...I really enjoyed your well written collaboration Keith and Hifsa. Welcome to Whispers Keith. Thank you both for sharing your talents together.<br />CharleneCharlenehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01059682223719672751noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-30679775818368380982017-03-23T19:02:45.444-07:002017-03-23T19:02:45.444-07:00Keith and Hifsa,
Congratulations on all the wonde...Keith and Hifsa,<br /><br />Congratulations on all the wonderful comments you have received on your collaboration! The repetition in the last stanza builds until the last line bring forward your heartfelt message. Keith, welcome to Whispers! I hope you consider sharing an individual poem for our readers to enjoy. The guidelines link is in bright blue at the right of the main page. Thank you both for sharing your gifts of words.<br /><br />Blessings,<br />Karen Karen O'Learyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10510849199110347270noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-39954745531285118602017-03-23T16:20:13.262-07:002017-03-23T16:20:13.262-07:00Keith and Hifsha,
A great poetry collaboration. W...Keith and Hifsha,<br />A great poetry collaboration. Welcome Keith to Whispers!<br />Your new friend,<br />David Fox<br />David Foxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00643062518983481529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-66978141778858896442017-03-23T09:45:56.477-07:002017-03-23T09:45:56.477-07:00A beautiful depiction of the soul's longing fo...A beautiful depiction of the soul's longing for union with the One. Thank you for sharing your talent with us, Keith and Hifsa.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11710837421810646769noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-51598277998231526282017-03-23T09:29:12.117-07:002017-03-23T09:29:12.117-07:00Dear Hifsa & Keith Thanks for teaming up to br...Dear Hifsa & Keith Thanks for teaming up to break from cocoon <br />of mating & how love should be, in this calm of reality <br />fact, by spanning distance from England to Pakistan. <br />Work of great imaginary, put together with the <br />understanding of two's known reality. I <br />really enjoyed the last nine nine lines <br />of factual passion. Very good <br />Partnership writing.<br />YancyAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00621680592495406229noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-35628699787875305952017-03-23T08:38:28.025-07:002017-03-23T08:38:28.025-07:00wonderful collab well done +hisfa ashraf +keith do...wonderful collab well done +hisfa ashraf +keith dodrill..hattontomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15444919954833396252noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-59898062985064014072017-03-23T08:04:25.695-07:002017-03-23T08:04:25.695-07:00Thank you so much Michael and Karen. Thank you so much Michael and Karen. Hifsa Ashrafhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11354535882799868545noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-17966884054698069862017-03-23T06:14:30.208-07:002017-03-23T06:14:30.208-07:00Dear Keith and Hifsa,
Thank you for this well-craf...Dear Keith and Hifsa,<br />Thank you for this well-crafted poem that evokes your theme of beauty with passionate and memorable images. What a blessing for our Whispers community.<br />Do send us more!<br />MichaelAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01470845403243884175noreply@blogger.com