tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post3637962986259549220..comments2023-10-31T19:20:19.643-07:00Comments on Whispers... : Partners in Poetry--By Sara Kendrick, United States and Jack Horne, EnglandKaren O'Learyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10510849199110347270noreply@blogger.comBlogger27125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-48839695055969210192019-01-17T22:49:49.636-08:002019-01-17T22:49:49.636-08:00Dear Sara,
This a lovely poem, well-done by you a...Dear Sara,<br /><br />This a lovely poem, well-done by you and Jack. Good use of imagery to share your thoughts in this wonderful poem. Thank you for sharing it for us to read.<br /><br />Blessings and best wishes,<br />KarenKaren O'Learyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10510849199110347270noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-53279659075232851202018-12-14T05:54:55.568-08:002018-12-14T05:54:55.568-08:00Ahh!! Your comment is so appropriately fitting for...Ahh!! Your comment is so appropriately fitting for the poem. I appreciate your stopping by. SaraSara Kendrickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13734785248608529629noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-12216911962783191112017-05-01T13:22:28.880-07:002017-05-01T13:22:28.880-07:00Peggy, It was a delight to write..Sara..Thanks for...Peggy, It was a delight to write..Sara..Thanks for stopping by..Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14879182959255322702noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-32102595612974517002017-05-01T13:21:33.476-07:002017-05-01T13:21:33.476-07:00Paul,I am so glad that you like our flashes of ima...Paul,I am so glad that you like our flashes of imagery. I hope your imagination filled with great ideas..SaraAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14879182959255322702noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-53788009156270116372017-04-20T13:44:34.406-07:002017-04-20T13:44:34.406-07:00Thanks for the invitation to join the group..I enj...Thanks for the invitation to join the group..I enjoy reading other writers..SaraAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14879182959255322702noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-84936992542966097022017-04-20T13:43:01.490-07:002017-04-20T13:43:01.490-07:00Your comment is uplifting..SaraYour comment is uplifting..SaraAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14879182959255322702noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-37982827069358176922017-04-18T12:35:10.251-07:002017-04-18T12:35:10.251-07:00Jack, Thanks for writing with me..It was an intere...Jack, Thanks for writing with me..It was an interesting endeavour..SaraAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14879182959255322702noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-4856994399109288582017-04-18T12:33:50.874-07:002017-04-18T12:33:50.874-07:00Daginne, Thanks for your visit to our work..I appr...Daginne, Thanks for your visit to our work..I appreciate you taking time to read and comment..Your encouraging comments..SaraAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14879182959255322702noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-26714903816458243002017-04-18T12:31:03.516-07:002017-04-18T12:31:03.516-07:00Spring has sprung here with summer warmth hanging ...Spring has sprung here with summer warmth hanging onto the apron strings..Sara.Thanks for dropping by and for including us in this part of Whispers..Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14879182959255322702noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-78467801143797609362017-04-18T12:28:31.161-07:002017-04-18T12:28:31.161-07:00Little boys do love that mud and some grown men..S...Little boys do love that mud and some grown men..SaraAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14879182959255322702noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-72992402918180422712017-04-12T13:43:23.134-07:002017-04-12T13:43:23.134-07:00Yes, I enjoyed his splashing in muddy puddles
Yanc...Yes, I enjoyed his splashing in muddy puddles<br />YancyAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00621680592495406229noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-49125857550037447252017-04-12T08:39:10.109-07:002017-04-12T08:39:10.109-07:00Thanks so much for reading and giving your thought...Thanks so much for reading and giving your thoughts about the work. The cold wet scene did not daunt the little boy's spirit..SaraAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14879182959255322702noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-62831376259355773422017-04-12T08:35:13.654-07:002017-04-12T08:35:13.654-07:00Maybe the next time we can lead you to join the li...Maybe the next time we can lead you to join the little boy into a muddy puddle..Thanks for dropping by and taking time to comment..SaraAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14879182959255322702noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-24390532159733227102017-04-12T08:31:33.515-07:002017-04-12T08:31:33.515-07:00Your reading and taking time to comment is so upli...Your reading and taking time to comment is so uplifting.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14879182959255322702noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-67390097786760451402017-04-12T08:30:35.539-07:002017-04-12T08:30:35.539-07:00Thanks so much for your encouraging comments..Sara...Thanks so much for your encouraging comments..SaraAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14879182959255322702noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-89348694534066391382017-04-10T21:47:50.866-07:002017-04-10T21:47:50.866-07:00PLAYFUL, SURPRISING--DUN WORK. I like the wonderfu...PLAYFUL, SURPRISING--DUN WORK. I like the wonderful (clear and detailed parallel structure in the first 3 stanzas (the grey/dark/cold frame set in 1st 2 lines, the movement into activity and "blooming"in the remainder of each stanza, and the graceful way the whole poem parallels that one-stanza structure by the "rebirth" movement in the 4th stanza. It is like the poem says "no" to death--and very effectively. Great job!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09647070416760042258noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-63430508133401913442017-04-09T14:41:01.152-07:002017-04-09T14:41:01.152-07:00I really enjoyed this a lot, thanks for sharing it...I really enjoyed this a lot, thanks for sharing it with us.pdfrenchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04690350418411308958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-17645153189475803692017-04-09T13:28:41.016-07:002017-04-09T13:28:41.016-07:00I like how you wrote this poem in flashes of image...I like how you wrote this poem in flashes of imagery, Sara and Jack. The ending is a subtle attempt at nudging our own imagination. Best regards // paulpaul callushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03414808197259322785noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-26875675123933916232017-04-08T21:18:11.410-07:002017-04-08T21:18:11.410-07:00Dear Sara and Jack,
Thank you for sharing this po...Dear Sara and Jack,<br /><br />Thank you for sharing this poem with its interesting perspective. I appreciate the joy you are at whispers and in the writing community at large.<br /><br />Blessings always,<br />KarenKaren O'Learyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02169168444862156783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-10322274762244440042017-04-08T12:00:30.997-07:002017-04-08T12:00:30.997-07:00it's beautiful!it's beautiful! Hifsa Ashrafhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11354535882799868545noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-6222541572312777182017-04-08T10:35:56.806-07:002017-04-08T10:35:56.806-07:00Thanks to everyone for their kind comments & t...Thanks to everyone for their kind comments & thank you to Sara for writing with meJack Hornehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03282885887172857346noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-27430661014418281652017-04-08T09:57:05.697-07:002017-04-08T09:57:05.697-07:00If I can feel the atmosphere in a poem, than it...If I can feel the atmosphere in a poem, than it's a good one.<br />This poem makes the scenery vivid. Congrats poets<br />Daginne Aignendhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00241145606442687593noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-36837707070470555112017-04-08T09:30:06.713-07:002017-04-08T09:30:06.713-07:00Dear Sara and Jack,
Really like the way your treat...Dear Sara and Jack,<br />Really like the way your treated your theme of Winter Landscape. As spring approaches your poem bids a fond farewell to that season as it opens the door for spring to take up residence.<br />Thank you,<br />MichaelAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01470845403243884175noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-73390488131698408042017-04-08T07:08:35.600-07:002017-04-08T07:08:35.600-07:00Dear U.S. Citizen Sara and English Jack, I like th...Dear U.S. Citizen Sara and English Jack, I like the fact<br />it stuck to the title "Winter Landscape. I loved the <br />people animal painted pictures of this Poem.<br />Refreshing writing.<br />YancyAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00621680592495406229noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-82847748723465826602017-04-08T06:10:01.005-07:002017-04-08T06:10:01.005-07:00Disappointed that the poem didn't lead anywher...Disappointed that the poem didn't lead anywhere; it left me looking for more.You both kept the same verse shape which is encouraging. Sorry if this sounds negative. Until the next one!<br />Ralph.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15779454249606627488noreply@blogger.com