tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post5944550517084295806..comments2023-10-31T19:20:19.643-07:00Comments on Whispers... : haiku--By Sabrina West--United StatesKaren O'Learyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10510849199110347270noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-54921512797114022782014-07-02T04:01:26.127-07:002014-07-02T04:01:26.127-07:00Enjoyable Haiku and good to see you here, welcome!...Enjoyable Haiku and good to see you here, welcome! x<br />anaisnaishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15859358923784811408noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-44298104171280032392014-03-01T09:56:54.115-08:002014-03-01T09:56:54.115-08:00Sabrina,
Both haiku are good embellished with a li...Sabrina,<br />Both haiku are good embellished with a little humor.<br />~David FoxAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17449044065362074619noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-56477581673727681662014-02-18T13:36:46.059-08:002014-02-18T13:36:46.059-08:00Hi Sabrina. I enjoyed your Haiku. I hope you wil...Hi Sabrina. I enjoyed your Haiku. I hope you will consider submitting some poetry (Haiku included) to Creative Inspirations, the poetry publication the good Lord blessed me to create in His glory and honor. More information can be viewed at the link below, or you can get the mailing info from Karen. Continued blessings!<br /><br />-Maurice J. Reynolds, Owner / Editor<br /> TGBTG! Publications / Creative Inspirations<br /> www.tgbtgpublictions.comAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-88078380368126880742014-02-17T09:44:51.808-08:002014-02-17T09:44:51.808-08:00Went to Walmart just today
Where is a parking spot...Went to Walmart just today<br />Where is a parking spot I say<br />Every one full of shopping carts.<br /><br />We need more Haiku on Whispers Sabrina, thanks for posting these gems.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07857729786911753779noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-52382535690647285302014-02-15T11:24:21.970-08:002014-02-15T11:24:21.970-08:00Hi Sabrina,
What great wit you have! I absolutel...Hi Sabrina,<br /><br />What great wit you have! I absolutely adore the line about the "menopausal shopping cart." Brilliant haiku! Best wishes, CarolynAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-83542889026718842122014-02-14T08:49:40.750-08:002014-02-14T08:49:40.750-08:00Dear Sabrina -
Both of these Haiku are wonderful....Dear Sabrina -<br /><br />Both of these Haiku are wonderful. HOWEVER, the second is stupendous. Bullfighting in a health food store cracked me up. Oh forget it - each line delivers it's own punch. I love day moon/missing haiku. More more.<br /><br />love,<br />KathyKathryn Collinshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02124610786398648292noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-27652146115860693592014-02-12T02:20:31.709-08:002014-02-12T02:20:31.709-08:00I agree with Kristina - great line, 'Menapausa...I agree with Kristina - great line, 'Menapausal shopping carts'. Very unique and deep! Way to go...<br /><br />Rhoda GalgianiRhoda Galgianihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17790649850644976894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-85756230977274151092014-02-11T13:48:08.205-08:002014-02-11T13:48:08.205-08:00It's so good to have you at Whispers Sabrina! ...It's so good to have you at Whispers Sabrina! So happy to see you already have two wonderful comments. If you have any questions, please let me know. Keep your talent shining. Congratulations on your writing successes.<br /><br />Blessings,<br />KarenKaren O'Learyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10510849199110347270noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-51548600732987782722014-02-11T04:52:28.627-08:002014-02-11T04:52:28.627-08:00'Menapausal shopping carts' - great line! ...'Menapausal shopping carts' - great line! KristinaKristinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01202114594674316827noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-23220611955666604082014-02-10T12:45:16.189-08:002014-02-10T12:45:16.189-08:00Sabrina, I love your rendition of Haiku and the so...Sabrina, I love your rendition of Haiku and the sort of cynical side projected, which provides a certain humorous outlook on the realities of life........ SheriAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03667011145772871853noreply@blogger.com