tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post6479154441494998945..comments2023-10-31T19:20:19.643-07:00Comments on Whispers... : she thought she heard--By Jim Teeters--United StatesKaren O'Learyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10510849199110347270noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-91954638681753097202015-04-20T16:52:18.751-07:002015-04-20T16:52:18.751-07:00This deft arrangement of words leaves the reader a...This deft arrangement of words leaves the reader a chance to interpret in many ways. It seems that the woman is on the brink of death...or on the brink of an opportunity. I especially liked "she breathed with them in unison". (However, I challenge the "quiet as a wheat field at night". I grew up on a farm and a wheat field is full of sounds at night--from the soft winds bristling through the grain to the feet of the small field mice as they bustle away from swooping owls.) Well done! VictoriaAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17136247528615594598noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-75233436307875148312015-04-15T15:16:29.530-07:002015-04-15T15:16:29.530-07:00Your poem is a beautiful masterpiece. Thank you.Your poem is a beautiful masterpiece. Thank you.Elizabeth Kralhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01857564762269507332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-37491879683969225182015-04-13T14:23:39.660-07:002015-04-13T14:23:39.660-07:00Wonderful. Nice work, Jim. I enjoyed it. Contin...Wonderful. Nice work, Jim. I enjoyed it. Continued blessings!<br /><br />-MJ (www.tgbtgpublictions.com)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-27491380960521772612015-04-11T13:35:17.553-07:002015-04-11T13:35:17.553-07:00especially far from home, I can relate so much to ...especially far from home, I can relate so much to thatJoan Mackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13705414021320761347noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-79372600891825248932015-04-04T18:16:24.715-07:002015-04-04T18:16:24.715-07:00'she knew how small she was, how far from home...'she knew how small she was, how far from home' - evocative for each one of us...<br />MaureenAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-73230249246702039852015-04-04T14:33:40.952-07:002015-04-04T14:33:40.952-07:00great piece Jim!great piece Jim!pdfrenchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04690350418411308958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-83520364067138628982015-04-04T14:02:06.704-07:002015-04-04T14:02:06.704-07:00Jim, a lot can be derived from your poem and I fin...Jim, a lot can be derived from your poem and I find the "angelic" reference to be like an echo .... very creative and artistically written and expressed...... SheriAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10971114740583357594noreply@blogger.com