tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post7516200875824705504..comments2023-10-31T19:20:19.643-07:00Comments on Whispers... : Fata Morgana--By Elly Wouterse--NetherlandsKaren O'Learyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10510849199110347270noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-33222173544516649272014-11-18T12:42:14.821-08:002014-11-18T12:42:14.821-08:00Dear Elly,
A great illustration of how one strugg...Dear Elly,<br /><br />A great illustration of how one struggles through life as days go by but hanging onto our dreams. Loved the descriptive words you used "unyielding legs and riveted feet".<br />A wonderfully written poem to ponder over. Thank you for sharing your poetry with us.<br /><br />SandraS. Stefanowichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17654288916037926725noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-28549905740098843002014-11-11T12:12:06.099-08:002014-11-11T12:12:06.099-08:00Hi Elly! I think that this is one of your best poe...Hi Elly! I think that this is one of your best poems. You have captured an important aspect of life. The final couplet .... excellent! // paulpaul callushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03414808197259322785noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-63364731669869375502014-11-11T09:51:03.907-08:002014-11-11T09:51:03.907-08:00Hi Elly. I enjoyed "Fata Morgan." I ag...Hi Elly. I enjoyed "Fata Morgan." I agree with the above that this is a beautifully illustrated poem. Thank you for sharing and continued blessings!<br /><br />-MJ (www.tgbtgpublictions.com)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-63626149464193469602014-11-09T11:41:13.937-08:002014-11-09T11:41:13.937-08:00This poem is one that tugs at the essence of those...This poem is one that tugs at the essence of those moments when we feel as if time is dragging and we are caught like so many prisoners being marched in shackles across the desert of time's sands. It IS an amazing picture. Thank you. PamRhymetimebluezBloghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07578673901534296428noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-39158972228410867312014-11-08T07:42:19.577-08:002014-11-08T07:42:19.577-08:00Yes, I agree with Maureen that your word painting ...Yes, I agree with Maureen that your word painting is strong and amazing! Beautifully done! SheriAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10971114740583357594noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-31516459306656934802014-11-07T11:28:42.983-08:002014-11-07T11:28:42.983-08:00you paint an amazing picture
Maureenyou paint an amazing picture<br />MaureenAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com