tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post1114017229746935511..comments2023-10-31T19:20:19.643-07:00Comments on Whispers... : Drawings Made of Chalk--By Pam Murray--CanadaKaren O'Learyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10510849199110347270noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-41101888172474807012014-04-16T14:38:39.427-07:002014-04-16T14:38:39.427-07:00Nice poem with very nice imagery, Pam. I especial...Nice poem with very nice imagery, Pam. I especially love the 3rd stanza. I can imagine writing this poem's images with chalk. Great job. Continued blessings!<br /><br />-Maurice J. Reynolds, Owner / Editor<br /> TGBTG! Publications / Creative Inspirations<br /> www.tgbtgpublictions.com<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-10029483288337229492014-04-11T15:59:56.799-07:002014-04-11T15:59:56.799-07:00So very beautiful, Pam. It's sad to think of ...So very beautiful, Pam. It's sad to think of the hand of time brushing away the happy times, but inevitably it does. Getting a bit teary-eyed now. Just want to let you know how much your poem touched my heart. Best wishes, CarolynAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10955381918758611801noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-22091062774341182522014-04-10T21:47:03.266-07:002014-04-10T21:47:03.266-07:00Thank you Terry. Your feedback is so welcome. :)
...Thank you Terry. Your feedback is so welcome. :)<br /><br />PamRhymetimebluezBloghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07578673901534296428noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-29065022458610812322014-04-10T21:46:09.309-07:002014-04-10T21:46:09.309-07:00Thank you Robert. Writing is very special to me a...Thank you Robert. Writing is very special to me and I appreciate your feedback.<br /><br />PamRhymetimebluezBloghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07578673901534296428noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-19125064138068268232014-04-10T21:45:12.049-07:002014-04-10T21:45:12.049-07:00Thank you Charlene; I love writing and sharing my ...Thank you Charlene; I love writing and sharing my poetry. I appreciate your feedback.<br /><br />PamRhymetimebluezBloghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07578673901534296428noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-3779635443930965402014-04-10T21:43:50.516-07:002014-04-10T21:43:50.516-07:00Thank you so much Sheri; I love writing and sharin...Thank you so much Sheri; I love writing and sharing my poetry and apreciate the feedback.<br /><br />PamRhymetimebluezBloghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07578673901534296428noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-62623249845435525252014-04-10T11:13:49.409-07:002014-04-10T11:13:49.409-07:00Very nice imagery, Pam... TerryVery nice imagery, Pam... TerryAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05516679112059517372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-71203778768385135972014-04-10T08:32:08.442-07:002014-04-10T08:32:08.442-07:00Beautiful remembrance poem Pam, such good imagery ...Beautiful remembrance poem Pam, such good imagery and flow. Welcome to Whispers you will be a great addition to the contributors. RobertAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07857729786911753779noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-28162605451618709012014-04-09T20:17:09.256-07:002014-04-09T20:17:09.256-07:00Pam, welcome to whispers! I so very much enjoyed ...Pam, welcome to whispers! I so very much enjoyed your lovely poem. I particularly liked the lines Today those passing years Are drawings made of chalk And time becomes a hand That brushes them away. The analogies are particularly poignant and well written. Thank you so much for sharing your talent. I am looking forward to reading more of your poems.<br />Love, Charlene<br />Charlenehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01059682223719672751noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-81399113912004654342014-04-09T17:40:48.610-07:002014-04-09T17:40:48.610-07:00Thank you, Connie Marcum Wong, for the following c...Thank you, Connie Marcum Wong, for the following comment--<br /><br />Dear Pam,<br /><br />Your poem has such a beautiful nostalgic presence<br />which bodes well expressing the depth of romantic love.<br />It is wonderful Pam! Blessings, Connie<br />Karen O'Learyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10510849199110347270noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-32285596819031163032014-04-09T14:24:29.767-07:002014-04-09T14:24:29.767-07:00Pam, your poem is so beautiful and soft giving a f...Pam, your poem is so beautiful and soft giving a feeling of sentimental and nostalgia in a memory. Your title is so lovely and yet very strong. Welcome to Whispers. Hope to read more of you. Sheri / www.poetryandbeyond.netAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03667011145772871853noreply@blogger.com