tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post2987838601564003409..comments2023-10-31T19:20:19.643-07:00Comments on Whispers... : Spring, the New Season--By George L. Ellison--EnglandKaren O'Learyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10510849199110347270noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-79943242381615237742017-03-10T18:37:57.690-08:002017-03-10T18:37:57.690-08:00Dear George I enjoyed "Spring, the New Season...Dear George I enjoyed "Spring, the New Season".<br />Refreshing English style write. I like the two Rhyming <br />lines and end line of each four line stanza. My wife <br />is a fine English woman so I have been to England<br />twice and am about to go there again for another <br />visit. I love your Poetry. Tatty bye.<br />YancyAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00621680592495406229noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-34646978028696136642017-01-21T06:04:28.760-08:002017-01-21T06:04:28.760-08:00I like Autumn also Maurice but it is the precusor ...I like Autumn also Maurice but it is the precusor to winter so I much prefer spring as summer is by then just around the corner <br /><br />I'm pleased you enjoyed the poem!<br /><br />GeorgeGeorge L.Ellisonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13270206474176667230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-65388733108207016712017-01-21T06:02:32.446-08:002017-01-21T06:02:32.446-08:00Dee is Welsh and posts on The Poets and Writers Al...Dee is Welsh and posts on The Poets and Writers Alliance where she introduced us to this style a few months ago I'm pleased you like her creation Michael!<br /><br />GeorgeGeorge L.Ellisonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13270206474176667230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-31678468844118959672017-01-17T12:47:33.494-08:002017-01-17T12:47:33.494-08:00George,
Yes. I can't wait till Spring gets he...George,<br /><br />Yes. I can't wait till Spring gets here, too. Although Autumn is my favorite season, your spring-lined poem put me in a bit of a anxiously-awaiting mood. Thank you for sharing and continued blessings!<br /><br />-MJ (www.tgbtgpublictions.com)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-42441141574292713852017-01-13T14:03:06.022-08:002017-01-13T14:03:06.022-08:00Dear George,
I thought I noticed a pattern particu...Dear George,<br />I thought I noticed a pattern particularly with the 4-count stanza-ending line. The form Triplets #136 is new to me, so I am grateful to receive this additional teaching.<br />Blessings,<br />MichaelAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01470845403243884175noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-82939824740321589782017-01-13T08:20:58.482-08:002017-01-13T08:20:58.482-08:00Thank you Michael for your prompt reply I'm pl...Thank you Michael for your prompt reply I'm pleased you like my poem it is actually a Triplets 136 style poem, I will set out below the style if anyone wishes to give it a go!<br /><br />*Triplets #136 Created by Dee Dawn. Has 4 stanzas of Triplets<br />that count 10 syllables each then a solo 4th line that counts 4 <br />Rhyme is axa, b, cxc, d, exe, b, fxf, d ( X means no rhyme)<br />Subject Optional Centre Aligned<br /><br />keep up the good work at Karen's side you're doing a fine job<br /><br />George George L.Ellisonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13270206474176667230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-37509051127057535832017-01-12T18:22:57.036-08:002017-01-12T18:22:57.036-08:00Dear George,
I really appreciate your intimations ...Dear George,<br />I really appreciate your intimations of spring, living as I do, in Illinois, a state known for prairies, wind, and snow.<br />Thank you!<br />MichaelAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01470845403243884175noreply@blogger.com