tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post444967619075446546..comments2023-10-31T19:20:19.643-07:00Comments on Whispers... : Special Feature Youth Writer--Dayva Ann Learned--United StatesKaren O'Learyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10510849199110347270noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-60485968395140628442014-09-01T20:26:02.948-07:002014-09-01T20:26:02.948-07:00Dear Dayva,
What wonderful poem you have written ...Dear Dayva,<br /><br />What wonderful poem you have written here. You are very talented young lady with a lot of tenacity like another lady I know. Congratulations on your win in the Florida State Poetry Contest and keep up the great writing!<br /><br />All the best to you for continued success,<br />Sandra Stefanowich S. Stefanowichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17654288916037926725noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-66062852804208198372014-08-29T20:45:00.374-07:002014-08-29T20:45:00.374-07:00Dayva you are quite a talented young lady and I so...Dayva you are quite a talented young lady and I so much enjoyed your brilliant poem that shows what a "go getter" you are. Welcome as the first youth poet on Whispers. I am looking forward to reading more of our wonderful poetry. <br />Love, Charlene Charlenehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01059682223719672751noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-79458235787896089872014-08-26T08:41:05.424-07:002014-08-26T08:41:05.424-07:00Thank you, Jean Calkins, for the following--
How ...Thank you, Jean Calkins, for the following--<br /><br />How wonderful! A superb poem for an adult, let along a 12-year old. Please let her know I think she has a bright future in poetry, probably putting us all to shame!<br /> <br />Love, JeanKaren O'Learyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10510849199110347270noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-36804941880749027122014-08-25T07:16:05.292-07:002014-08-25T07:16:05.292-07:00Hello Dayva. Welcome to Whispers and congratulati...Hello Dayva. Welcome to Whispers and congratulations on being the first youth writer here. As your poem clearly indicates, you are quite the talented person. I want to wish you continued success in all your writing endeavors. I really enjoyed your poem. <br /><br />-MJ (www.tgbtgpublictions.com)<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-23436609189833946252014-08-24T11:32:16.214-07:002014-08-24T11:32:16.214-07:00Thank you, Jack Horne, for the following--
awesom...Thank you, Jack Horne, for the following--<br /><br />awesome write indeedKaren O'Learyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10510849199110347270noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-86365367280534277922014-08-23T10:42:41.989-07:002014-08-23T10:42:41.989-07:00Thank you, Arthur Ford, for the following--
Good ...Thank you, Arthur Ford, for the following--<br /><br />Good poem by Dayva, well crafted with the use of the synecdoche(she as the part possessing what we all (the whole) can!!!!<br /><br />what a catapult for her!!!!!<br /> <br />arthur c. ford,sr.,poet/editor<br />www.thepoetbandcompany.yolasite.comKaren O'Learyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10510849199110347270noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-91253081904162573072014-08-23T08:22:57.213-07:002014-08-23T08:22:57.213-07:00Hello, Dayva! How fun to read the words which swe...Hello, Dayva! How fun to read the words which sweetly define who you are and express a wonderful, positive and inspiring look at life! Your poem, as read by my own family, is delightful and impressive! I am thrilled you paint and draw, too, because this all feeds off the depths of you! As you grow keep active and enthralled with the beauty of life as you are well on the road to great successes! A pure joy to read you here in this Whispers venue! Sheri / www.poetryandbeyond.netAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10971114740583357594noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-13492640902481883712014-08-23T03:50:21.319-07:002014-08-23T03:50:21.319-07:00Wow I better watch out. I think you have so much t...Wow I better watch out. I think you have so much talent. and I'd like to welcome you to our site. Keep writing. your great best wishes. Pete.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16620390975047718855noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-73114258426390310432014-08-22T16:51:15.504-07:002014-08-22T16:51:15.504-07:00It is so good to see young people being active in ...It is so good to see young people being active in sport and literature/arts. At 12 I had already written my first poems, but nowhere as good as yours. Well done and keep that pen going. Best wishes.......paulpaul callushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03414808197259322785noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-65217601230794604212014-08-22T14:09:43.947-07:002014-08-22T14:09:43.947-07:00Dayva,
You write exceptionally well. It's no ...Dayva,<br />You write exceptionally well. It's no wonder you placed second in your student contest! (By the way if I were judging the contest you would have probably have placed first!) Welcome to Whispers and I am looking forward to more of your poetry!<br />Yours truly, <br />David FoxAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17449044065362074619noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-90894994031628651182014-08-22T12:03:24.367-07:002014-08-22T12:03:24.367-07:00Dear Dayva, What a creative and witty write! You ...Dear Dayva, What a creative and witty write! You must have inherited your father's upbeat perspective on life. Take the stinger out of that bee and she'd "bee" welcome in my home. Congratulations on your win in the state contest. I'm so glad to see you participating here. Welcome to Whispers!<br /><br />Best wishes,<br />CarolynAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10955381918758611801noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-31592275375570293842014-08-22T11:44:36.569-07:002014-08-22T11:44:36.569-07:00Truly delightful - enjoy the bee that lives within...Truly delightful - enjoy the bee that lives within you - I'm sure you are fierce on the soccer field as well - I like the idea that you are small but can pack a punch if pushed incorrectly - nice wording - you deserved the win in Florida Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09669519178945930909noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-51926222916693458452014-08-22T11:42:49.919-07:002014-08-22T11:42:49.919-07:00Great well-written poem, Dayva! Welcome to Whisper...Great well-written poem, Dayva! Welcome to Whispers!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01385345836738851547noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-81022518814429873632014-08-22T11:38:32.635-07:002014-08-22T11:38:32.635-07:00Dear Dayva,
Welcome to Whispers! It is so good t...Dear Dayva,<br /><br />Welcome to Whispers! It is so good to see you already have three comments on your wonderful poem. Congratulations! Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. If you have any questions, please let me know.<br /><br />Sincerely,<br />KarenKaren O'Learyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10510849199110347270noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-58673664971101310972014-08-22T11:28:24.177-07:002014-08-22T11:28:24.177-07:00Thank you, Linda Hurdwell, for the following--
We...Thank you, Linda Hurdwell, for the following--<br /><br />Well done!Karen O'Learyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10510849199110347270noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-72045864018751512562014-08-22T11:25:25.442-07:002014-08-22T11:25:25.442-07:00Thank you, Beth Winchcombe, for the following--
D...Thank you, Beth Winchcombe, for the following--<br /><br />Dear Dayva,<br /><br />Poetry, short stories, painting and drawing at just twelve years of age. It would seem all things creative go together with you. Good luck in the future with all your talents.<br /><br />Beth Winchcombe - ENGLAND.Karen O'Learyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10510849199110347270noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8629436772073396833.post-21265564569120654832014-08-22T11:24:44.136-07:002014-08-22T11:24:44.136-07:00Welcome Dayna:
Great use of metaphor here and free...Welcome Dayna:<br />Great use of metaphor here and free verse style.<br />Looking forward to more of your poems<br />SuZPixordiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13325442640290517301noreply@blogger.com