Dear Whispers
Family,
The February writing activity has been, Using Simile and Metaphor in Poetry. Thank you to all who sent in submissions.
This collection showcases your creative writing skills. Enjoy reading and using
these tools of the poetic craft. Let poetry be fun!
Michael Escoubas, Whispers' Features Editor
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Lost Within
In youth, her mind was an open field
sprouting musings as thought flowers
that mirrored her life.
Now, her mind is a dark stairwell
with memories like word shadows
melting into oblivion.
Mary A. Couch, United States
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Stolen Time
The heat was oppressive
It was raining cats and dogs
It began in the early morning
time is a thief on the last day of
holiday
Feeling blue they packed their bags
Looking longingly out the window.
Phyllis Babcock, Canada
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Nocturnal Sightings
Walking home on a moonlit night,
head bowed against the bitter cold.
I notice the pretty silhouettes
under every bare-branched tree –
the footpath an artist's sketchpad,
each tree like a filigree silver brooch.
Mary Gunn, Ireland.
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Red roses in the
garden
Somber thoughts clouded my mind,
As I sat calm on the garden bench.
While parting as a prickly thorn,
Pierced my tender gloomy heart.
Till the soul rested in tranquility,
And all the roses stained dark red.
Dr. Upma A. Sharma,
India
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Standing Tall
I am
the New York skyline.
Buildings wink on and off
like patent leather
across a blinking sky.
Jean Colonomos, United States
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Restored
Your heart pumps my blood
Your breath fills my lungs
Your voice is a song of immaculate beauty
I can feel your presence as though you are next to
me
I was lost in an abyss of emptiness
But you found me, filling that void with joy
Langley Shazor, United States
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Pretzel
As a hummingbird, dazed by its crash,
begins to rise like a rickety kite,
the dog sees. I would rescue the bird,
but my bedraggled shoes betray me.
I twist about the post, fall headlong,
my back, a pretzel.
Elizabeth Howard, United States
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Gifts
Driving along as the day breaks
a neon sky paints the road peach,
sea gulls perform their sky-dance
fields and hedgerows sparkle
like frosting on a cake.
Annie Jenkin, England
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Unborn
When I think of my unborn
I guess I will have a girl
Her eyes will be sparkling diamonds
And cheeks as red as apples
She will be the apple of my eye
Indeed, the light of my life!
(As per PNDT Act – the sex determination of foetus is
illegal. A woman in India is not told till she delivers – whether it is a boy
or a girl. In this poem – I am sharing the thoughts of a mother)
Archana Kapoor, India
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Hurry Sundown
Clouds float and play like a litter of white Poodles
tumbling and twisting over the Gulf
until the wind, an errant shepherd,
herded them toward the horizon.
Barbara Tate, United States
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Under The Lock And Key
I replaced my losses,
I fixed the broken door.
My emotions as waves,
Ebbed and waned:
Like the unfixed shadows
of my dreams.
Ralph Stott, England
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Does An Orange Get Sweeter In The Bowl
The navel oranges like my love looked
divine
I purchased some perfect orange fruit for mine
Easy peel like taking off clothes
stirring sweet scents
The lusciousness to be desired of a tasty treat
Divided into segments, plop, tart touched my soul
Question haunts newlywed, does an orange get sweeter in the bowl?
Sara Kendrick, United States
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And the Fun Goes On
When the sun looks and rises with its smiling rays
Positive people welcome it warmly like bridesmaids
Standing in support of the bride and the best man
Making sure the groom’s wedding day pans out well
The bride’s gown might be blown inside-out by wind
Or the groom’s suit wholly dirty but the party goes on.
Ndaba Sibanda, Kuwait.
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My Hero
August birthday...
my father is a Leo
always lion hearted
Pat Geyer, United States
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Cold February Rain
No one welcomed the rain
like a biddy aunt in velvet
tapping with gnarly knuckles.
This sly rain of overlays
ripples news on a street gutter
that remembers blizzard.
Tricia Knoll, United States
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Reverie
when the clouds like swift horses
secure every corner in the sky,
I become the orange splashed twilight.
but in the shade
night stands in waiting,
to let my dreams pass through in silence..
Gopal Lahiri, India
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Red roses in the
garden
Somber thoughts clouded my mind,
As I sat calm on the garden bench.
While parting as a prickly thorn,
Pierced my tender gloomy heart.
Till the soul rested in tranquility,
And all the roses stained dark red.
Dr. Upma A. Sharma,
India
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A Medallion Moon
A medallion moon adorns ebony skies,
as its limpid light pools
like a gleaming gold doubloon,
dangling dreamlike, under a
chandelier of sparkling stars.
Emile Pinet, Canada
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Let's Go to the Local, Darling.
He's standing at the long, curved bar
Flirting with the pretty, blond barmaid
His wife’s face like
white ice
Looking around for revenge
She who was sweet and lovely
Now a prowling tigress.
Isha Wagner, New Zealand
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The Live Oak
Sprawling sixty feet high
gnarly limbs a ladder to heaven
poking holes in flimsy clouds
branching habit a tree-climber's dream
draped magnificently with Spanish moss
like curly grey furs.
Candace Armstrong, United States
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Disenchantment
Sometimes reality
is like ice rain
on a hot summer night
A sudden disillusion,
life is a fairytale,
remains to be a wicked lie
Inge
Wesdijk (Daginne Aignend) the Netherlands
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Love’s Metaphor
As the sun shows her beauty each day
You are even more delightful to behold
Like a summers day your warmth embraces me
Keeping me held close in your loving arms
I will surrender to your love only
For there is no other who compares
Glenda B. Frazier,
United States
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Return of Spring
With songbirds' trills
a heavenly heraldry
spring returns...
and I am Gaia
dancing to birdsong
with a tiara of daisies!
Angelee Deodhar, India
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Be my Valentine (Double Triodyne)
Eyes, blue velvet fine
Skin smells of turpentine
Please be my Valentine
Your smile, like a chime
Babe come with me to dine
Will you be my valentine?
Yancy Dalton, United States
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Heavenly Vista
Light as a feather it fell last night.
Snow is a blanket of angel white
Joy to the children who walk to school
Shouting with glee at this endless pool
That covers the sidewalks and coats the fields.
Winter returns as early Spring yields.
Pam H. Murray, Canada
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Winter
Like a cold winter day,
My memories freeze away
My memories fade, a dream
Is an enigma, or so it would seem.
David Fox, United States
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The Bent Bard
a broken umbrella,
the rain pours on…
a drifter & a dreamer
lost between two words
Karen O'Leary, United States
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Girl at Eventide
In twilight stillness shadows spray
like fans through
crimson clouds and tops
of trees. Standing there sipping lemon tea
you are Van Gogh’s Girl in White
complete with yellow bonnet--
Dutch delight destined for the Louvre.
Michael Escoubas, United States
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