Drawings Made of Chalk
I dream across the years 
Of footprints in the sand, 
Of splashing in the sea 
And you holding my hand. 
I see those long car rides 
When you and I would talk. 
Today those passing years 
Are drawings made of chalk 
And time becomes a hand 
That brushes them away. 
At night when I’m alone 
I reach for yesterday, 
For hugging as we passed. 
You were my solid ground. 
Your voice filled me with song. 
I strive to catch that sound.
Born in Calgary, Alberta, Pam Murray has been writing poetry since the mid-1960’s.  She was married for over 41 years and has two daughters, a son-in-law, and a grandson.  Pam has been published in a variety of venues.  Her proudest writing accomplishment was a poem she wrote for a United Way fundraiser, which was later framed with a French translation and hung on the wall of the legislature in Ottawa, Canada.  To her, poetry is a transposition of a vision she sees in her mind.  Writing and crocheting are her passions.
 
Pam, your poem is so beautiful and soft giving a feeling of sentimental and nostalgia in a memory. Your title is so lovely and yet very strong. Welcome to Whispers. Hope to read more of you. Sheri / www.poetryandbeyond.net
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Sheri; I love writing and sharing my poetry and apreciate the feedback.
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Thank you, Connie Marcum Wong, for the following comment--
ReplyDeleteDear Pam,
Your poem has such a beautiful nostalgic presence
which bodes well expressing the depth of romantic love.
It is wonderful Pam! Blessings, Connie
Pam, welcome to whispers! I so very much enjoyed your lovely poem. I particularly liked the lines Today those passing years Are drawings made of chalk And time becomes a hand That brushes them away. The analogies are particularly poignant and well written. Thank you so much for sharing your talent. I am looking forward to reading more of your poems.
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Thank you Charlene; I love writing and sharing my poetry. I appreciate your feedback.
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Beautiful remembrance poem Pam, such good imagery and flow. Welcome to Whispers you will be a great addition to the contributors. Robert
ReplyDeleteThank you Robert. Writing is very special to me and I appreciate your feedback.
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Very nice imagery, Pam... Terry
ReplyDeleteThank you Terry. Your feedback is so welcome. :)
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So very beautiful, Pam. It's sad to think of the hand of time brushing away the happy times, but inevitably it does. Getting a bit teary-eyed now. Just want to let you know how much your poem touched my heart. Best wishes, Carolyn
ReplyDeleteNice poem with very nice imagery, Pam. I especially love the 3rd stanza. I can imagine writing this poem's images with chalk. Great job. Continued blessings!
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