Sunday, September 29, 2013

The Sunshine of Her Smile--By Peter Dome--United Kingdom

The Sunshine of Her Smile

She beamed so much sunshine
out of her tender heart,
so pure and welcoming,
straight to mine
through her radiant smile
and the warmth in her beguiling eyes,
so enchanting and sublime.

And within that glorious tender moment
my heart and soul were captured.
I felt reborn and so alive.
As we planted a beautiful blooming garden of vibrant color
and the world melted away.
I was so lost in her exquisite beauty
and the story within her eyes.
For in her I saw the future,
what I prayed for.
I had found paradise!

Hi, my name is Pete. I live in Sheffield, U.K. I hope you enjoy my poems. I look forward to reading yours. My best wishes. Pete.


  1. Again, expressing my enjoyment for this romantic poetry. Welcome to 'Whispers'. So happy you will be joining us...

    Rhoda Galgiani

  2. Hi Pete, welcome to Whispers. I was very impressed by your poem. Lots of folks write love poems, but yours actually made me feel the love. The way you describe being reborn is how I felt when I first saw my late husband. Love can happen at first sight. I hope you stay in this wonderful partnership forever. Best wishes, Carolyn

  3. Ah a fellow poet that paints pictures with words and allows the reader to 'feel' all the emotions in this delightful story. I enjoyed being taken along with your romantic journey. Welcome to Whispers Pete! Love Jane

  4. Peter,
    This lady's smile seems to emit such glory by your recalling --I can tell life has treated you the same. Beautifully inspiring words. Welcome to Whispers!
    David Fox

  5. This is a beauty, Pete. The perfect words to convey beautiful emotions. Welcome to Whispers!

  6. I loved the imagery and beauty that your words have drawn me to a feeling of love.

  7. Dear Peter,

    Thank you for the comments you left for others at Whispers today. I see others are enjoying this poem as much as I did. Congratulations! Keep on writing and sharing your words.