Sunday, May 18, 2014

Day Story--By Peter Dome--United Kingdom

Day Story

As the night succumbs, goes to rest
and dark velvet skies turn to vibrant blue,
the air still crisp.
The morning gently settles in.
The dawn chorus begins
with joyful bird song
awakening the sleepy unfolding flowers
kissed by moist droplets of dew.
As the warming sun
smiles down
upon the lush green ground
and nature comes alive in abundant glory
in celebration of a new day
and the beginning of another
day story.

Hi, my name is Pete. I live in Sheffield, U.K. I hope you enjoy my poems. I look forward to reading yours. My best wishes. Pete.


  1. Pete, your word painting is vivid and rich in descriptive scenery. You are a master magician with word placement and juxtaposition as would be a master painter inserting the perfect stroke and color.......... beautifully done and mission accomplished! Sheri /

    1. Hi Pete, Your lovely words paint a vivid picture before my eyes. Wonderful poem! I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing...~Chris

    2. Wow that's some great comment. I'm overwhelmed by your kind words. Thank you so much. Made my day. Really appreciate it. Take good care. Warm best wishes. Pete.

  2. What a beautiful scenery you have composed with your poetic words Peter, so enchanting this imagery is, such a lovely poem to read. Blessings always, Lee

    1. Thank you so much Lee. I really appreciate your kindness and support. A pleasure to hear from you. Have a great weekend. Take care, best wishes. Pete.

  3. Hi Pete, I have certainly enjoyed this scenic poem. It is filled with vivid descriptions of nature and human compassion. Very nice write, Pete. Thank you for sharing. Continued blessings!

    -Maurice J. Reynolds, Owner / Editor
    TGBTG! Publications / Creative Inspirations

    1. Hi Maurice. Always a real pleasure to hear from you. I really enjoy your work too. A big thank you for your kind words. take good care, my best wishes. Pete