Friday, February 2, 2018

our summer love song--By ayaz daryl nielsen--United States

our summer love song

those certain 
singing days be-
ginning to end. . . 
perhaps a bit
off-key, at times, 
yet, still singing 
our summer song

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run around all day
intertwined with poetry
you and I, yes, us

——

I am 
because 
these words exist

—— 

atmosphere
inflated by the 
wings of birds

ayaz daryl nielsen, veteran, hospice nurse, ex-roughneck (as on oil rigs) lives 
in Longmont, Colorado, USA.  Editor of bear creek haiku (30+ years/140+ issues) 
with poetry published worldwide (and deeply appreciated), he also is online at:   https://bearcreekhaiku.blogspot.com

8 comments:

  1. very thoughtful & thought-provoking

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  2. Dear ayaz,

    A very impressive composition. I have read it a few times and each time your words became more beautiful.

    Best wishes,
    Inge

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    1. many cheers and accolades for Inge! ayaz daryl nielsen

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  3. Grand verse; my Imagination spurred, and I thank you.

    warmed by the noon sun
    pens scribe under leaf filled trees
    each branch a new word

    __ The newer form?

    late day sun
    trees write as seen
    leaf shadows

    _m

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  4. great collection, always wonderful to see your work here ayaz! cheers!

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  5. Nice set of poems, ayaz. I especially enjoyed the first one. Thank you for sharing and continued blessings!

    -MJ
    (www.creativeinspirationspp.blogspot.com)

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