Barely a child,
you had nothing to say about it
all those years ago. It was never
your decision to make. But where
there was no family, you made one.
Thank you for being my son.
The first word we heard from you,
hanging by your fingers outside
the crib you couldn’t sleep in (and
never did) was “Mama!” And later
the second word, and the third, I
heard when I came upon you, peddling
with furious joy in the driveway,
were one and the same when you
saw me, coming home to my family:
“Daddy! Daddy!”
Thank you for being my son.
James Keane's previous Whispers’ published poem, "Apology" (March, 2018), was awarded Third Place at the 2018 St. Catherine of Bologna Photography, Art and Poetry Exhibition, held annually in Ringwood, New Jersey USA.
you had nothing to say about it
all those years ago. It was never
your decision to make. But where
there was no family, you made one.
Thank you for being my son.
The first word we heard from you,
hanging by your fingers outside
the crib you couldn’t sleep in (and
never did) was “Mama!” And later
the second word, and the third, I
heard when I came upon you, peddling
with furious joy in the driveway,
were one and the same when you
saw me, coming home to my family:
“Daddy! Daddy!”
Thank you for being my son.
James Keane's previous Whispers’ published poem, "Apology" (March, 2018), was awarded Third Place at the 2018 St. Catherine of Bologna Photography, Art and Poetry Exhibition, held annually in Ringwood, New Jersey USA.
James,
ReplyDeleteA beautiful tribute to your son. Greet job.
Your friend,
David Fox
Thank you very much, David.
Deletetouching & loving words indeed
ReplyDeleteThank you, Jack. And thank you for your amazing contribution to Whispers.
DeleteLove your poem - very touching
ReplyDeleteCaryl Calsyn
Thank you, Caryl. A Facebook friend told me I should have issued a tissue warning with the poem.
DeleteDear James
ReplyDeleteThanks for being my son relates to me as a real tear jerker
Thanks for taking me on the tour
Knight Writer
Thanks for coming along, Yancy.
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