Friday, January 25, 2013

Flopping--By Carolyn Devonshire--United States

Flopping

Okay, so I'm not the cream of the crop
And so far my love life has been a flop
Plenty of fish in the sea
But none are swimming to me
All the fish my age are floating on top

Carolyn Devonshire is from Ormond Beach, Florida.
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12 comments:

  1. AnonymousJanuary 25, 2013 at 10:18 AM

    Dear Carolyn,

    Hey there my friend! It's so nice to see you on here. I enjoyed your limerick and got a good laugh out of it. You've got a great sense of humor my friend and hope to see more poems from you.

    Sandra

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    1. Karen O'LearyJanuary 25, 2013 at 10:31 AM

      Dear Sandra and Carolyn,

      Thank you both for being a part of Whispers and for sharing your wonderful poems. Like Sandra, Carolyn, I got a good laugh out of this poem. You are so good at limericks. Both of you are blessings to the writing community.

      Karen

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  2. Karen O'LearyJanuary 26, 2013 at 12:57 PM

    Thank you Joyce Johnson for the following comment--

    For Carolyn. So nice to find you here and I don't believe it for a minute. You are so young and pretty. Love, Joyce

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  3. Karen O'LearyJanuary 27, 2013 at 11:56 AM

    Thank you Jack Horne for the following comment--

    Carolyn Devonshire - lol, good one, Carolyn - had a chuckle here

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  4. Rhoda GalgianiJanuary 28, 2013 at 5:27 PM

    Enjoyable Limerick Carolyn - brings a smile to my face - thank you for that...

    Rhoda

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  5. Kathryn CollinsJanuary 29, 2013 at 8:01 AM

    Carolyn -

    What a last line. I am rolling on the floor - can relate.

    love,
    Kathy

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  6. CHRISTINA JUSSAUMEJanuary 30, 2013 at 3:13 PM

    This is a fine limerick... that gave me a chuckle of laughter... it was a delight.... That last line is PRECIOUS!! God bless Christina

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  7. UnknownJanuary 30, 2013 at 6:51 PM

    Maybe Sonar....lol

    So glad to find you here Carolyn!!!!!God Bless

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  8. Karen O'LearyFebruary 1, 2013 at 8:31 PM

    Thank you Andrea Dietrich for the following comment--

    For Carolyn: This is sure a cute little poem and its title fits perfectly with the fun theme. it's great to see you here, for you are a poet I much admire!

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  9. UnknownFebruary 5, 2013 at 5:12 PM

    This was cute, kinda sounds like my life~! :)

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  10. Karen O'LearyMarch 2, 2013 at 10:31 AM

    Thank you, Jack Clubb, for the following comment--

    This is a delightful humorous poem. We need more of these in the poetry world.

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  11. ichthysMarch 4, 2013 at 1:00 AM

    Nice to read your work again Carlolyn.You can hear me read one of my latest style on youtube here http://youtu.be/GiD8JdYi-jw. Best wishes with your writing Rgds Brian

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