Waves
Waves of the waters of life,
Flowing from the widow’s heart,
Streaming past the silent bay -
Waves of the waters of life.
Beyond the shelter of the bay
Churning sands along the shore
Waves of the waters of life
Flowing from the widow’s heart.
Joann Grisetti has been writing for 45 years. She is a retired teacher from Florida. She receives encouragement from her daughter and has recently enrolled in a creative writing workshop. She is a member of Poetry Soup. You can read more of her poetry there.
Hi Joann,
ReplyDeleteI really like how you did this poem and the picture you created. Very
nicely done.
Sandra
Dear Sandra,
ReplyDeleteI agree with you. Thank you for stopping by to comment. I appreciate having talented people like you and Joann here at Whispers. Keep on writing and sharing your words.
Karen
Thank you Joyce Johnson for the following comment--
ReplyDeleteFor JoAnne" Thank you for your kind comments on my poem. Yours is beautiful, meaningful and sad. Love, joyce
Dear JoAnne,
ReplyDeleteThank you for sending me comments to post on others' poems. It is kind people like you that will make Whispers an encouraging site. Best wishes with all your writing endeavors.
Karen
Thank you Andrea Dietrich for the following comment--
ReplyDeleteFor Joann: Joann, you have the talent to say so much with so few words. I love the reflective beauty of your poetry, as displayed in this poem Waves.
Nice to read you here on Karen's page Joann.You can hear me read one of my latest style on youtube here http://youtu.be/GiD8JdYi-jw. Best wishes with your writing Rgds Brian
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