Thursday, January 15, 2015

A poem but Ill-fated-By Pijush Kanti Deb--India

A poem but Ill-fated

A poem,
maybe, a careful embellishment
with the illumination
of the luminous hearts,
an immortal image
drawn with the ink of nectar
borrowed from the Heaven,
painted with more than seven colors
collected from
both the rain-bow and the dream-bow
an offering from the devotees
to the earthly Gods
live and die
only in the literary world
yet, the poem is always ill-fated
to be loved and praised
only by a few
differently made hearts and tongues.

Pijush Kanti Deb is a new Indian poet with more than 210 published or accepted poems in national and international magazines and journals like Down in the dirt, Tajmahal Review, Pennine Ink, Hollow Publishing, CreativicaMagazine, Muse India, Teeth Dream Magazine, Hermes Poetry Journal, Madusa’s Kitchen and Grey Borders. At present, he is working as an Associate Professor in Economics.

20 comments:

  1. beautiful words - love this poem
    Maureen

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    1. Thank you very much- I love you as you love my poem.

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  2. Dear Pijush,

    Thank you for sharing your wonderful poem. It's good to see you already have one lovely comment. Welcome to Whispers! I hope you enjoy your time spent here.

    Best wishes,
    Karen

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    1. Thank you very much. Coming into Whispers is my pleasure.

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  3. Congratulations, Pijush! I enjoyed reading your poignant poem. :)

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    1. Dear Friend,
      Feeling great in thanking you on your unabated encouragement to me.

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  4. Dear Pijush, Wecome to Whispers. I so much enjoyed the well written poem. Thank you for sharing your talent with us here on Whispers. Keep'm coming.
    Charlene

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  5. Dear Pijush. Welcome to Whispers and thank you for sharing your passionate and well written poem. Continued blessings!

    -MJ (www.tgbtgpublictions.com)

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  6. Thank you Maurice for welcoming me and appreciating my poem

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  7. Pijush,
    A well-written poem. I would love to have you in my magazine (The Poet's Art) if you can afford and are willing to pay the $10 fee.
    Sincerely,
    David Fox

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    1. Dear Mr David, thank you very much for appreciating my poem and willing to pay me a fee. Now please tell me about your email add. so that I can send my poem to your The Poet's Art for which I will be quite happy.

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    2. Pijush,
      I am not sure you understand. I am charging $10 for people to submit. If you still want to submit, my address is ipoetdavid@gmail.com
      Your new friend,
      David Fox

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  9. Congratulations, Pijush, that David is recruiting you for his magazine. :)

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    1. In the morning I was quite happy and as the sun reached his zenith I was pushed to the dark dimension of human nature to become sad for whole the day.

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  10. What a wondrous piece this is. Describing the indescribable. Getting to the essence of this form we all love.

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  11. Nice poetic definitions of a poem

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