Sunday, March 3, 2013

All is Sleep--By Suzanne Delaney--United States

All is Sleep

A foal races circles around its dam,
content with an instinct
that confines and controls
his tiny orbit; a world,
without abstracts.
No hell - No heaven!
a pasture, thence,
his whole existence.

Prostrate, on meadow grass,
his eyes glaze - eclipsed by
heavy lids. Buttercups
and drowsy warmth lull
his gangling form, nether.
All is sleep.

Suzanne Delaney was born in Tasmania and, now lives in Hawaii.
A retired Registered Nurse she enjoys her time to be creative
and to write about life around her.

7 comments:

  1. Thank you, Phyllis Babcock, for the following comment:

    Suzanne--A wonderful descriptive poem about the life of a foal.

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  2. Thankyou Phyllis
    I appreciate your comment.

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  3. Dear Suzanne,

    Thank you so much for all the kind comments you left for others at Whispers today. It is encouraging people like you that make the site a supportive place to share writing. I greatly appreciate your efforts.

    Karen

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  4. Your words give a great visual of the meadow - everything just a bit lazy and sleepy eyed. Nice reading with a gentle flow...

    Rhoda

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  5. Dear Suzanne,

    That first stanza shows contentment can be found in the confines of what we call restriction. I imaging that foul romping carelessly in a meadow of a world, and then his legs splayed in sleep. What a treat to read.

    love,
    Kathy

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  6. Thank you, Rick Sponaugle, for the following comment--

    A unique and deep poem, well thought out. It makes the reader think. Superb imagery and choice of words.

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