Blooms Gone Wild
The
lawns, well-
manicured,
along my street,
are nice, with their trees
strategically spaced,
bushes looking like bookends
for porch-front flowers, and beds of
stunning roses, bright tulips or small
decorative trees encircled by stones.
But I am more enthralled to see the yard
not so meticulously arrayed -
like an impressionist's painting.
A profusion of diverse
shapes and sizes. . . yellows,
oranges, and reds. . .
is sprayed across
it - lovely
blooms gone
wild.
Andrea Dietrich grew up in Iowa and now resides in Utah with a spouse and two cats. She has two grown children and six grandchildren. Having graduated BYU with a Spanish major/ESL minor, she has spent most of her adult life teaching. It wasn't until 2000 that she began writing in earnest and discovering her "niche" as a writer of lyrical poetry. The internet opened up a new world for her, and she has spent nearly a decade now participating in poetry clubs, acting as a judge of poetry contests for various magazines and for the website Shadow Poetry.
Hi Andrea,
ReplyDeleteThis poem was so descriptive it was an impressionist
Painting. I loved reading it. Well written.
Love,
Yvonne
Thank you, Jack Clubb, for the following comment--
ReplyDeleteAs always, I am addicted to form poems. I still enjoy reading Andrea's beautiful sonnets. This is a delightful double etheree. As the poem points out, perfection is sometimes tedious and there is charm to things that are is disarray. Andrea said it well.
Andrea, this is a beauty, my friend! It is 'well-manicured'like the lawns you describe here.
ReplyDeleteSuper visual Andrea - we are all longing for Spring. Lovely reading...
ReplyDeleteRhoda
Thank you, Phyllis Babcock, for the following comment:
ReplyDeleteAndrea--An awesome write on this poem. Nature's blossoms are scattered and not neatly cultivated.
You have painted a lovely scene in words.
ReplyDeleteLove the final line.
Hi Andrea,
ReplyDeleteA lovely visual you have written here and agree that nature is enjoyable as it is. Nicely done and thanks for sharing.
Sandra
Thank you, Jack Horne, for the following comment--
ReplyDeleteAndrea Dietrich: What a beautiful write - I could almost smell the flowers!