Tuesday, July 8, 2014

With Love--By Peter Dome--United Kingdom

With Love

Swirling patterns of iridescent colours
Of yellow red green and blue
Illuminated light
Of every shade and hue.

A kaleidoscope toy
Bringing wonder and excitement
To a young child's eyes
A present from Grandma and Granddad
One happy content child

Hi, my name is Pete. I live in Sheffield, U.K. I hope you enjoy my poems. I look forward to reading yours. My best wishes. Pete.
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20 comments:

  1. UnknownJuly 8, 2014 at 3:58 PM

    Hi, Pete, this is a very fun write and one to put into your family journal. Great imagery and, yes, love, too! I enjoyed it very much! Sheri / www.poetryandbeyond.net

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  2. UnknownJuly 8, 2014 at 5:08 PM

    Hi Sheri, great to hear from you. glad you enjoyed it. thank you so much. Much appreciated. my best wishes. Pete.

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  3. AnielicaJuly 8, 2014 at 11:25 PM

    What a beautiful memory you have as a keepsake Peter.
    Such a loving gift from your grandparents. Blessings always, Lee

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  4. UnknownJuly 9, 2014 at 6:36 AM

    Thank you so much Lee so good to hear from you. I appreciate your kindness very much.glad you enjoyed it. best wishes. Pete.

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  5. AnonymousJuly 9, 2014 at 10:53 AM

    Hi Peter. This is a very nice poem that is full of warmth and dear feelings. Thank you for sharing it with us. Continued blessings!

    -MJ (www.tgbtgpublictions.com)

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    1. UnknownJuly 12, 2014 at 12:37 PM

      Hi Maurice. thank you so much my friend. So glad you enjoyed it. look forward to reading more of your wonderful work soon take care. Pete.

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  6. UnknownJuly 9, 2014 at 12:26 PM

    Hi Peter, Memories are a treasure! Thanks for sharing your delightful poem. ~Chris

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    1. UnknownJuly 12, 2014 at 12:35 PM

      Thank you Chris, so true. So glad you enjoyed it. take care, best wishes. Pete.

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  7. Karen O'LearyJuly 10, 2014 at 1:08 PM

    Thank you, Beth Winchcombe, for the following--

    IT'S NICE TO SEE A POEM WRITTEN BY ANOTHER POET WHO LIVES NEARBY IN SHEFFIELD-ENGLAND. I WOULD LIKE TO THANK YOU FOR YOUR COMMENTS ON MY POEM ENTITLED ' SHARING.' KEEP WRITING MORE POETRY PETER, ALWAYS WRITE FROM THE HEART. I LOOK FORWARD TO SEEING YOUR NAME AGAIN.

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  8. UnknownJuly 12, 2014 at 12:34 PM

    Hi Beth. so good to hear from you. a fellow Sheffielder like myself. i live near Worksop these days.. when i can find it. i'd love to read more of your work. i always write from the heart. i need to express myself and one day I might understand myself ha ha. Thank you so much. take good care. best wishes. Pete.

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  9. UnknownJuly 12, 2014 at 6:47 PM

    Pete,
    Love the poem, but you couldn't wait until I published your poem in my print mag before sending it here? By the way, I will use this in September's issue.
    Your friend, efore you submitted it here? Will cite proper credit to Whispers, of course. Specifically I like the child-like innocence in the poem Good job!
    ~Davidf
    Your friend from the U.S.,
    David Fox

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    1. UnknownJuly 13, 2014 at 3:50 AM

      Hi David thank you so much. I'm thrilled I can wait. good look with your magazine, great to hear from you. take care. best wishes. Pete.

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  10. S. StefanowichJuly 15, 2014 at 10:05 AM

    Dear Peter,

    A lovely poem of the wonder and excitement of child seen through the eyes of the Grandparents, a special moment for them to remember. Nicely written thank you for sharing it with us.

    Sandra

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    1. UnknownJuly 15, 2014 at 4:37 PM

      Thank you so much Sandra..With all the hi tech toys today. a simple old kaleidoscope, just like we had could still give pleasure to a young child. A magic moment for grandparents and child. take care Sandra. best wishes. Pete.

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  11. UnknownJuly 18, 2014 at 2:22 PM

    Ahh, Peter. You reminded me of the first time I looked into a kaleidoscope. It was like a magical telescope in which you could view other dimensions. Excellent write!

    Love,
    Carolyn

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  12. UnknownJuly 27, 2014 at 5:35 AM

    Hello Carolyn. So good to hear from you again. thank you so much for your kind words. hope it brought back some fond memories for you. I'd love to reply to everyone's poems. But apart from the one's listed on the write. I can't. Once again a big thank you. warm best wishes. Pete.

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  13. Rhoda GalgianiJuly 28, 2014 at 8:37 PM

    Nice reading Peter - brings back my own memories. Keep up the great writing...

    Rhoda Galgiani
    Expresssions Poetry Journal
    chesakat1.blogspot.com

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  14. UnknownJuly 31, 2014 at 1:38 PM

    Hi Rhoda great to hear from you. hope your ok. missed you lots. hope your ok. glad you enjoyed it. hope it brought back some fond memories. take good care. best wishes. Pete.

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  15. Karen O'LearyAugust 1, 2014 at 11:51 AM

    Thank you, Suzanne Clement, for the following--

    What a lovely way you have expressed colors of God's creation, Peter.

    Suzanne

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  16. Karen O'LearyAugust 30, 2014 at 5:40 PM

    Thank you, John Polselli, for the following--

    Very touching, Peter. So simple and sweet. It is as though a tear were being suppressed behind the words. Very moving.

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