Mimosa
Oh mimosa sumosa cover her safe,
green ferny leaves, soft coral blossoms of a feathery
South. Backwoods grandma city’s mama rock on
the back porch. They watch the men in the dirt
yard
look under the truck’s hood. They sip iced tea
from jars
that jiggle on a wobbly bent little table as all the kids
run down the porch, then jump off as pirates to the
loose
dust under the mimosa. The girl picks a mimosa
blossom
holds it to her hair…princess of the pirates…mimosa,
mimosa…in your warm Southern shade,
she laughs and curtsies there.
(First published in 2008 by Iconoclast #100)
Barbara Robinette is the author of two books of poems, Plain and Sea
Leafs By Moon. A third book is forthcoming. Several of her
poems have appeared in print and on-line. She has written poems, off
and on, since President Kennedy’s assassination in 1963 when someone read “Oh
Captain, My Captain” during the funeral procession. She thinks
poetry is for everyday, working people and keeps that audience in mind when
writing her poems.
Dear Barbara,
ReplyDeleteWelcome to Whispers!
Your debut poem Mimosa, conveys wonderful images. I especially like "soft coral blossoms of a feathery south."
Well done--can't wait for more.
Thank you, Michael!
DeleteBarbara,
ReplyDeleteNice poem. Welcome to Whispers!
Your new friend,
David Fox
Thank you, David. I look forward to reading your poems here too.
DeleteDear Barbara,
ReplyDeleteIt is good to see you already have two wonderful comments on your heartfelt poem with a creative view to share a bit of Southern charm. I look forward to reading more of your poetry. Welcome to Whispers!
Blessings,
Karen
Hi, Karen. Whispers is a positive place for poets and I'm glad to be part of it. And to read more of your poems.
DeleteWonderful to see you here, Barbara. Welcome. What wonderful images in your poem, Mimosa! It is such a delight to read.
ReplyDeleteThank you. Jo, it is very good that you are "here" too. Looking forward to reading more of your poems.
DeleteI love this. Takes me back to another age. Well written, kept me entranced to the end.
ReplyDeleteWelcome to Whispers. Ralph
Thank you, Ralph. So glad you enjoyed it.
DeleteBarbara
Hi Barara, I enjoyed your piece very much!
ReplyDeleteHi, Peggy. So good to hear that you liked my poem. Thank you!
DeleteHello Barbara. Welcome to Whispers! Thank you for the beautiful poem. Continued blessings!
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Hello, Maurice. Thank you for the welcome to Whispers. I think I'll like it here and thank you for liking my poem.
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