Monday, October 24, 2016

Mimosa--By Barbara Robinette--United States

Mimosa

Oh mimosa sumosa cover her safe,

green ferny leaves, soft coral blossoms of a feathery
South.  Backwoods grandma city’s mama rock on
the back porch.  They watch the men in the dirt yard
look under the truck’s hood.  They sip iced tea from jars
that jiggle on a wobbly bent little table as all the kids
run down the porch, then jump off as pirates to the loose
dust under the mimosa.  The girl picks a mimosa blossom
holds it to her hair…princess of the pirates…mimosa,

mimosa…in your warm Southern shade,
she laughs and curtsies there.

(First published in 2008 by Iconoclast  #100)

Barbara Robinette is the author of two books of poems, Plain and Sea Leafs By Moon.  A third book is forthcoming. Several of her poems have appeared in print and on-line.  She has written poems, off and on, since President Kennedy’s assassination in 1963 when someone read “Oh Captain, My Captain” during the funeral procession.  She thinks poetry is for everyday, working people and keeps that audience in mind when writing her poems.

14 comments:

  1. Dear Barbara,
    Welcome to Whispers!
    Your debut poem Mimosa, conveys wonderful images. I especially like "soft coral blossoms of a feathery south."
    Well done--can't wait for more.

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  2. Barbara,
    Nice poem. Welcome to Whispers!
    Your new friend,
    David Fox

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    1. Thank you, David. I look forward to reading your poems here too.

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  3. Dear Barbara,

    It is good to see you already have two wonderful comments on your heartfelt poem with a creative view to share a bit of Southern charm. I look forward to reading more of your poetry. Welcome to Whispers!

    Blessings,
    Karen

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    1. Hi, Karen. Whispers is a positive place for poets and I'm glad to be part of it. And to read more of your poems.

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  4. Wonderful to see you here, Barbara. Welcome. What wonderful images in your poem, Mimosa! It is such a delight to read.

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    1. Thank you. Jo, it is very good that you are "here" too. Looking forward to reading more of your poems.

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  5. I love this. Takes me back to another age. Well written, kept me entranced to the end.
    Welcome to Whispers. Ralph

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    1. Thank you, Ralph. So glad you enjoyed it.

      Barbara

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  6. Hi Barara, I enjoyed your piece very much!

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    1. Hi, Peggy. So good to hear that you liked my poem. Thank you!

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  7. Hello Barbara. Welcome to Whispers! Thank you for the beautiful poem. Continued blessings!

    -MJ (www.tgbtgpublictions.com)

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    1. Hello, Maurice. Thank you for the welcome to Whispers. I think I'll like it here and thank you for liking my poem.

      Barbara

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