“Clouds”
"Clouds, the clouds diffuse a sad and somewhat somber hue;
Rain, the rain descends aslant from angry ashen skies;
Winds, the winds bemoan their loss of reins and calm control;
Shades, the shades appear suffused, alone in lurid haze;
Trees, the trees enshroud the eyes of misty brooding woods;
Leaves, the leaves desert their branches, falling one by one;
Birds, the birds intone a tune, a mourning monody;
Grass, the grass surrenders blades, impaled in truant winds;
Fields, the fields imbibe and quaff to quench an arid thirst;
Stones, the stones repulse the pearls, exploding tears of gloom;
Streams, the streams meander, hushed, to distant vapid shores;
Clouds, the clouds diffuse a sad and somewhat somber hue"
Terry O’Leary defines himself as "A physicist lacking gravity...".
this is a lovely poem filled with fantastic imagery... truly enjoyed.... God bless
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ReplyDeleteDear Terry,
ReplyDeleteThank you for all the comments you have been leaving for other writers. What a joy to have you a part of Whispers. Keep up the good writing. I appreciate your willingness to share your talent with us.
Karen
Terry, Terry perseveres poetically, willfully writing words of wisdom
ReplyDeleteNo so good a mimic. You have broken out successfully once more into heretofore unchartered "short ones" Bravodio-o
love,
Kathy
Thank you, dear Kathy... Terry
DeleteThank you, Jack Horne, for the following comment--
ReplyDeletelovely poem with such a melancholy air
Thank you, Jack!
DeleteThank you, Rick Sponaugle, for the following comment--
ReplyDeleteVery good alliteration, and fine use of words. I've not heard in years: aslant, enshroud, etc. A comprehensive and great nature poem.
Thank you, Rick!
DeleteDear Terry,
ReplyDeleteI so enjoyed reading your poem today the imagery is amazing! A wonderful poem thanks for sharing it with us.
Sandra
Thank very much, Sandra... Terry
ReplyDeleteTerry, since you define yourself as:"A physicist lacking gravity", I suggest you make "Clouds" your "Theme Poem".
DeleteGOOD STUFF!!!!
My "Theme Poem" is entitled "All Men's Blood is Red".
I believe all poets should have a "Theme Poem"
arthur c. ford,sr.,poet/editor
www.thepoetbandcompany.yolasite.com(click on guidelines)
Thank you Slimgoodie! Done! "Clouds" is now my "Theme Poem"... And thank you, also, for your kind words... Terry (PS I would love to read your Theme Poem)
DeleteThank you, Gerald Heyder, for the following comment--
ReplyDeleteThis is a deep poem! Good work!
Thank you, Gerald!
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