Thursday, September 5, 2013

So far away (untitled poem)--By Sandra Stefanowich--Canada

So far away

into clouds of rolling fire
holding onto a world of tears
moving across stained glass skies.

So far away - you led me.

Into a dark, barren sky
my soul swept away by the tempest
left adrift in the ashen silence that lingered

so far away.

Sandra Stefanowich is from Ontario.
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9 comments:

  1. Karen O'LearySeptember 6, 2013 at 6:51 AM

    Thank you, Sandra, for the following comment--

    Dear Karen,

    Thank you for posting this poem for me and for your continued support in my writing on your wonderful site. I would also like to take this time to thank all the poets who left comments on my poems they were very much appreciated. My sincerest thank you to you all for taking the time. I would also like to welcome all the new writers to Karen's site. I hope you all enjoy it here. Congratulations to all the writers in their personal achievements in writing. Also thank you ahead of time for anyone who posts additional comments as I will be away from the internet for awhile.

    Sandra Stefanowich

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  2. Karen O'LearySeptember 6, 2013 at 6:56 AM

    Dear Sandra,

    Thank you for your kind words. You are such a talented writer. It's a privilege to publish your work at Whispers. You have also been very supportive and encouraging. I appreciate that and so do others. Take care. Hope to see you back soon.

    Blessings,
    Karen

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  3. AnonymousSeptember 6, 2013 at 8:26 AM

    Dear Sandra, I know that others have tried to lead you down a dark road in the past, but that time is coming to an end. Can't wait to see you soon. Excellent poem, my friend. Love, Carolyn Devonshire

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  4. Karen O'LearySeptember 6, 2013 at 11:24 AM

    Thank you, Jack Horne, for the following comment--

    Sandra: awesome

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  5. UnknownSeptember 6, 2013 at 1:03 PM

    Excellent poem. Its so touching. Keep it up

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  6. Rhoda GalgianiSeptember 6, 2013 at 5:34 PM

    Moving poetry that penetrates one's soul. Deep emotion bringing one to their own reality of what is 'so far away'...

    Rhoda Galgiani

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  7. Sunil UniyalSeptember 8, 2013 at 12:01 AM

    Very poetic and intelligent use of words...it moves my soul. Keep on writing and expressing your Self, Sandra. May God bless you.

    Sunil

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  8. Karen O'LearySeptember 30, 2013 at 8:10 AM

    Dear Sandra,

    Thank you so much for all the encouraging comments you left for others today. What a bright light you are. It was a pleasure to publish your wonderful poem too. You are a talented writer my friend. So good to have you a part of Whispers.

    Karen

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  9. Annalise BrighamNovember 10, 2013 at 8:47 PM

    Wonderful imagery in this amazing poem about journeying, Sandra...It is always glorious to see how life is always evolving! Ilove it!

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