Komorebi
By Sheikha A. and Suvojit Banerjee
Voices
of the night linger
as
dawn kisses the night goodbye
I
saw the light burst out
of
a white stag, standing like time
the
night jar disappeared into shades
of
a faded existence
the
ancient rivers of folk moving
on
a dying star, breaking
to
recollect old bones of the day
passed
through trembling winds
to
bring us news of souls in a pool
of
time, where the stag kissed
the
sand through its wings spanned
over
the air like a commandment
like
sunlight passing through leaves
of
jungle with no shape
the
lonely lighthouse’s hands raised
to
the wind, the stag pierced
the
relics of the guiding star – komorebi,
our reflections never whole.
Sheikha and Suvojit,
ReplyDeleteThis is beautiful! Welcome to Whispers Suvojit!
Your new friend,
David Fox
thank you ever so much, David! =)
DeleteStunning array of visuals, even as the beacon beckons... Great duet.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Michael! I'm glad you liked the piece! =)
Deletewow, this is amazing piece of words with art
ReplyDeletethank you for reading!
DeleteDear Sheikha and Suvojit,
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for sharing this amazing poem so rich in imagery. Welcome to Whispers Suvojit! I hope you will be sending an individual poem sometime soon. Sheikha,thank you for your ongoing support and encouragement.
Blessings,
Karen
best wishes to you, Karen!
Deletea very beautiful write - you work very well together
ReplyDeletethank you, Jack!
DeleteWell done, you two! Look forward to seeing more collaborations from you. -Laura M Kaminski
ReplyDeletethank you, always, Lauren!
DeleteGreat writing, so well intertwined and so very emotional with great imagery of sadness and searching souls. Welcome to Whispers. Robert Hewett
ReplyDeletethank you for reading, Robert; each of us is in search of a soul, light, peace but have different ways of seeking it, we thought about exploring each of our ways from one path, I'm glad it worked well!
Deleteintoxicated by the sounds imagery and energy of your duet! Enjoyed very much. Thank you for sharing! Ralph
ReplyDeletethank you, Ralph; believe me when I tell you that Suvojit's sense of imagery is far stronger than mine! I'm happy the poem turned out this good! =)
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ReplyDeleteSheikha and Suvojit, welcome to Whispers. What a way to make an entrance with a remarkable and nicely-collaborated poem. Thank you both so much for sharing it and continued blessings!
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Maurice, thank you for reading ! =)
DeleteI have come back to read this lovely poem for the second time (forgot to comment the first time). Well done Sheikha & Suvojit for an excellent co-write in which imagery plays a major part. Thanks to you I also learnt the meaning of the word Komorebi! ~ Regards // paul
ReplyDeleteglad you enjoyed this, Paul! thank you for stopping by once again!
DeleteThis is very lovely. Thanks.
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