We don't give up on
our dreams
I know of dreams walking
side by side with flames,
from the morning of their conception
striving hard to build homes
for healing of sick needs
to turn mountains of pain.
I know of boys burrowing into
the deepness of their dreams
to unearth streams of hope
for their drooping hearts.
I know a man in his twilight
who has waited fruitlessly for
a spark at the opposite end of
a long dark tunnel, and his
hopes turned into mournful tales;
but when we hear him say:
'dreams are not meant for us'
we fold our thoughts into flames,
into a heavy fist of stubbornness, saying
'we don't give-up on our dreams'.
(note: it's his first online publication)
Blessed Ayeyame is a Nigerian who is fascinated by the
written word and writes to partake of this fascinating experience.
Dear Blessed Ayeyame,
ReplyDeleteYou wrote an impressive poem with a message that spreads positivity and passion to never give up on your dreams.
Thank you for sharing.
Best wishes,
Inge
such a strong message of hope here
ReplyDeleteMetaphorically rich and uplifting, Blessed. We all have a right to dream, and where possible make those dreams come true. Regards & blessings ... paul
ReplyDeleteDear Blessed,
ReplyDeleteCongratulations on the response you are getting on you poem. Welcome to Whispers! Your poem is an insightful piece leaving the reader something to ponder about. I'm glad Whispers can be your first online publication. Wishing you ongoing success.
Blessings,
Karen