Saturday, January 3, 2015

Haiku--By ayaz daryl nielsen--United States

grandparent's laughing
scent
of lutefisk
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birdsong across
the meadow flowers
I know you’re near
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snoring
    a nail hammered
    a board cut
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ayaz daryl nielsen is a husband, father, veteran, x-roughneck (as on oil rigs)/hospice nurse, editor of bear creek haiku (25+ years/120+ issues), homes include Lilliput Review, Jellyfish, Whispers, Shamrock, and! bearcreekhaiku.blogspot.com (translates as joie de vivre)

16 comments:

  1. Excellent, love them al!! Always great to read your ayaz, hope to see more soon. Cheers and Happy New Year!

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  2. Love that last one - very masculine :)

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  3. Daryl--always a pleasure--good way to begin the New Year--Here's to creativity and inspiration in 2015

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    1. thanks, Barbara, always a better day just hearing from you -

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  4. Ayaz I loved all the Haiku, but my favorite reminds me of my precious husband. Perfect description of the sound of my sleeping partner next to me. Thank you for reminding me of the blessing of being able to tune him out, so much so, that even the fire crackers and bombs going off when the New Year came in, didn't even wake me. LOL Thank you for sharing your talent.
    Love, Charlene

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    1. I like this suggestion, and will share it with my wife!

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  5. such a pleasure to read your work

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  6. Hi Ayaz. I enjoyed your haiku. Thank you for sharing and continued blessings!

    -MJ (www.tgbtgpublictions.com)

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  7. Enjoyed your Haiku. Loved the comic accuracy of snoring. Thanks, Ron Grognet

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    1. yes, and am trying to convince my wife snoring is a mantra, and if she would listen, it would assist her into her own deep sleep - (little success so far, however)

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