Wednesday, September 23, 2015

Special Feature Collaborative Poem--By ayaz daryl nielsen and Peggy Dugan French--United States

our houses are full
grand stories scurrying about
us, accidental acolytes of
the unfolding chapters to follow
foreshadows of an ageless embrace

By ayaz daryl nielsen and Peggy Dugan French

15 comments:

  1. Outstanding collaboration! Thank you for sharing this at Whispers. - Laura M Kaminski

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  2. Ayaz and Peggy,
    This is very nice. I like it a lot!
    Your friend,
    David Fox

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  3. wow, Peggy writes so well - that ayaz daryl
    seems like something of a stinker, though - best!

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    1. Oh my gosh ayaz! You are so talented. I got a chuckle out of this. Thank you for all the support and encouragement you give me and others in the writing community.

      Best wishes,
      Karen

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    2. That's pretty funny ayaz! We all know that is not true! Thanks for the laugh and best to you my friend!

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  4. Thoroughly enjoyed this. Thank you Peggy & ayaz for writing this one.

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  5. Words well written exposing mindful beatiful feelings. Happy for reading it.

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  6. Peggy and ayaz, I thoroughly enjoyed your grand collaborative poem. You wrapped up your point well in a few words which I think is more difficult than writing a long poem. So many stories just waiting to be shared. Good job! Thank you for sharing your talents.
    Love, Charlene

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  7. Thank you for your kind words Charlene! Glad you enjoyed the piece! Best, Peggy

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