Joann Grisetti, an accomplished writer, generously offered to be the activity editor for October. She was gracious in thanking each contributor for sharing their ninette poems. The criteria for the form follows--
The ninette starts with one syllable, then two, then three up to five, then decreases. Ninettes begin and end with the same syllable count for a total of nine lines.
I would like to thank Joann for selecting these creative poems for publication and all the contributors that participated in this activity. It is a growing experience to try new things and a pleasure to see so many wonderful poems below. I hope you enjoy them as much as I do.
--Karen O’Leary, Whispers’ Editor
The ninette starts with one syllable, then two, then three up to five, then decreases. Ninettes begin and end with the same syllable count for a total of nine lines.
I would like to thank Joann for selecting these creative poems for publication and all the contributors that participated in this activity. It is a growing experience to try new things and a pleasure to see so many wonderful poems below. I hope you enjoy them as much as I do.
--Karen O’Leary, Whispers’ Editor
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No Go
No
It won’t
Work out right
Just will not fit
The gap is too small
Should I make it
Bigger to
Fit tight
Yes!
By Patricia Ann Farnsworth-Simpson
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Go Stay
Go
Do try
But just be
Careful that you
Don’t overdo it
Take it slowly
To make it
Tight to
Stay
By Patricia Ann Farnsworth-Simpson
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
hush
believe
the world sings
it cries no more
because of its pains
laughs and dances
just pretend
for now
sing
By Jim Teeters
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
kneel
and pray
pray for me
pray for yourself
seek the brightest light
in the heavens
for healing
for health
rise
By Jim Teeters
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
day
after
sordid day
I plod along
in a rut that grows
slowly deeper
swallowing
up the
night
By Robert P. Hansen
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
lost
among
memories
scattered across
long-forgotten days
your guiding hand
the only
thing i’ve
found
By Robert P. Hansen
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Freedom
Price
Freedom
Is costly
Some families
Give more than others
Don't disrespect
Sacrifice
Give thanks
Grave
By Shirley Smothers
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Sleep
Sleep
Eludes
Me often
The frustration
Of my life invades
My nightly dreams
I stay up
Depressed
Wake
By Shirley Smothers
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
first
robin
welcoming
warm days of spring
builds her nest in the
evergreen tree
sings a song
home at
last
By Barbara Tate
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
long
shadows
and clouds of
a coming storm
are gone with the wind
in half darkness
the days are
getting
short
By Barbara Tate
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Pain
and strife...
challenges
that can flower
and enrich others.
Words like petals
uplift lives
and bring
hope.
By Karen O'Leary
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
True
love is
the one thing
that changes you,
shaping who you are,
and yet does this
so subtly,
it don't
hurt.
By Emile Pinet
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Red
sky, that
reflects off
the blue river.
Distant rolling hills:
gently weaving
their paths of
ever
green.
By Ralph Stott
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Up
in the
sky, in a
hot air balloon.
The hurricane's path
is traced by the
trees that have
fallen
down.
By Ralph Stott
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
wet
eyes with
salty tears
flowing freely
my heart is breaking
trust this trial
for your good
my eyes
dry
By Charlene McCutcheon
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
lost
fearful
bewildered
anxious and praying
answers come slowly
as hope springs up
faith grows and
love is
found
By Charlene McCutcheon
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
still waters
still
waters
and stiller
these thoughts of mine
far in the sunset
the flamingoes
taking off
one by
one
By Raamesh Gowri Raghavan
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
yellow
with
the sun
on the rise
o'er the sea
is this yellowing
leaf yellower
in the bright
white of
day
By Raamesh Gowri Raghavan
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
dawn
lily
pond reflects
orange yellow red
autumn trees’ glory
so brilliant now
then fading
into
dusk
By Kelley White
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
high
above
our cottage
tree branches creak
in the heavy wind
threatening all
huddling down
small scared
low
By Kelley White
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
True
friends are
so precious
like diamonds.
Always treasure them!
They’ll support you
every day
of your
life
By Jan Allison
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
clouds
gather
overhead
rain pouring down
little by little
clouds pass away
sky turns blue
and then
sun
By Elizabeth Howard
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
dark
settles
suddenly
fierce voices call
fear overwhelming
I lie sleepless
till at last
comes the
light
By Elizabeth Howard
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Grief
Washes
Over me
- a tsunami
Of pain that soon ebbs.
Cleansed, I embrace
Life with a
Dance of
Joy
By John Daleiden
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Swing
it babe—
sheathed in silk,
she promenades
the Miracle Mile
amid the stark stares
of plain folk’s
gaping
eyes.
By John Daleiden
No Go
No
It won’t
Work out right
Just will not fit
The gap is too small
Should I make it
Bigger to
Fit tight
Yes!
By Patricia Ann Farnsworth-Simpson
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Go Stay
Go
Do try
But just be
Careful that you
Don’t overdo it
Take it slowly
To make it
Tight to
Stay
By Patricia Ann Farnsworth-Simpson
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
hush
believe
the world sings
it cries no more
because of its pains
laughs and dances
just pretend
for now
sing
By Jim Teeters
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
kneel
and pray
pray for me
pray for yourself
seek the brightest light
in the heavens
for healing
for health
rise
By Jim Teeters
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
day
after
sordid day
I plod along
in a rut that grows
slowly deeper
swallowing
up the
night
By Robert P. Hansen
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
lost
among
memories
scattered across
long-forgotten days
your guiding hand
the only
thing i’ve
found
By Robert P. Hansen
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Freedom
Price
Freedom
Is costly
Some families
Give more than others
Don't disrespect
Sacrifice
Give thanks
Grave
By Shirley Smothers
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Sleep
Sleep
Eludes
Me often
The frustration
Of my life invades
My nightly dreams
I stay up
Depressed
Wake
By Shirley Smothers
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
first
robin
welcoming
warm days of spring
builds her nest in the
evergreen tree
sings a song
home at
last
By Barbara Tate
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
long
shadows
and clouds of
a coming storm
are gone with the wind
in half darkness
the days are
getting
short
By Barbara Tate
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Pain
and strife...
challenges
that can flower
and enrich others.
Words like petals
uplift lives
and bring
hope.
By Karen O'Leary
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
True
love is
the one thing
that changes you,
shaping who you are,
and yet does this
so subtly,
it don't
hurt.
By Emile Pinet
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Red
sky, that
reflects off
the blue river.
Distant rolling hills:
gently weaving
their paths of
ever
green.
By Ralph Stott
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Up
in the
sky, in a
hot air balloon.
The hurricane's path
is traced by the
trees that have
fallen
down.
By Ralph Stott
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
wet
eyes with
salty tears
flowing freely
my heart is breaking
trust this trial
for your good
my eyes
dry
By Charlene McCutcheon
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
lost
fearful
bewildered
anxious and praying
answers come slowly
as hope springs up
faith grows and
love is
found
By Charlene McCutcheon
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
still waters
still
waters
and stiller
these thoughts of mine
far in the sunset
the flamingoes
taking off
one by
one
By Raamesh Gowri Raghavan
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
yellow
with
the sun
on the rise
o'er the sea
is this yellowing
leaf yellower
in the bright
white of
day
By Raamesh Gowri Raghavan
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
dawn
lily
pond reflects
orange yellow red
autumn trees’ glory
so brilliant now
then fading
into
dusk
By Kelley White
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
high
above
our cottage
tree branches creak
in the heavy wind
threatening all
huddling down
small scared
low
By Kelley White
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
True
friends are
so precious
like diamonds.
Always treasure them!
They’ll support you
every day
of your
life
By Jan Allison
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
clouds
gather
overhead
rain pouring down
little by little
clouds pass away
sky turns blue
and then
sun
By Elizabeth Howard
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
dark
settles
suddenly
fierce voices call
fear overwhelming
I lie sleepless
till at last
comes the
light
By Elizabeth Howard
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Grief
Washes
Over me
- a tsunami
Of pain that soon ebbs.
Cleansed, I embrace
Life with a
Dance of
Joy
By John Daleiden
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Swing
it babe—
sheathed in silk,
she promenades
the Miracle Mile
amid the stark stares
of plain folk’s
gaping
eyes.
By John Daleiden
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Your
silence
shouts silent,
eternal sounds—
surging surf washing
my dreamless nights
into long,
empty
days.
By John Daleiden
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
tears
falling
missing her
remembering
carefree happiness
may be found yet
there is hope
for new
smiles
By Jack Horne
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
life
too short
to worry
we are meant to
love wholeheartedly
someone special
each moment
before
death
By Joann Grisetti
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
This was a fun activity and am so happy to be included in this collection. Thank you Joann--good job.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed your poems, Barbara, as well as others. Joann did a wonderful job as activity editor this month. Thank you for participating.
ReplyDeleteBlessings,
Karen
Thoroughly enjoyed these. Thank you, Joann and poets!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Laura! Joann did a great job with these poems. I appreciate all Joann's hard work and the contributors creativity.
DeleteBlessings,
Karen
Wow. What a splendid display of poetry. I like them all. Good job, everyone. Thanks for sharing your talent and continued blessings!
DeleteHello Mary. Nice, fun, witty poem. Thank you for sharing and continued blessings!
-MJ (www.tgbtgpublictions.com)
Dear Maurice,
DeleteI agree with you that this a collection of wonderful poems thanks to Joann's hard work as Activity Editor this month. Blessings to you, too, my friend. Thank you for all the encouragement your give to others here at Whispers.
Karen
These are all fabulous words of wisdom. I surely enjoyed reading these glorious poems this morning. What a fun set of poems, Great work,
ReplyDeleteRussell
Dear Rusty,
DeleteI agree with you. Joann did a wonderful job as editor for this column. I was excited to see so many participating. Thank you so much for your kind words. Have a good day!
Blessings,
Karen