Wednesday, September 21, 2016

Special Feature Collaborative Poem--By ayaz daryl nielsen and Peggy Dugan French--United States

A Day in June

By ayaz daryl nielsen and Peggy Dugan French

gladiola petals
softly fall from the bouquet
surrounded by all
cocooned in joy
and the songs we’ll sing
delight us
yes, I will answer

a new journey begins…

30 comments:

  1. very beautiful poem,congratulations ayaz and Peggy,love angelee

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  2. What a lovely poem ayaz and Peggy. You work so well together. congratulations.

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    1. thank you, Jo - let's see more of your poetry, too!

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    2. Thanks Jo, glad you enjoyed the piece!

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  3. Filled with delight and hope...a beautiful collaboration! Congratulations to the talented poets ayaz daryl nielsen and Peggy Dugan.
    Thanks for sharing Karen.

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  4. What a treat for the eyes and ears, well done to both of you
    Take care
    Annie

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  5. and thank you Peggy Dugan French - such fun!

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  6. such lovely and hopeful set of verses!

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  7. Hi Ayaz and Peggy

    A lovely day in June you both have collaborated beautifully on. Enjoyed the read!

    Sandra

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    1. Thanks Sandra for your kind words!

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    2. yes, a thwack you from me, too - (oops, I mean, a thank you)

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  8. Brightened my day. What a delightful poem. Hope to be reading more by the two of you.

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    1. your words brighten by day, thank you. . .

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    2. Thanks Barbara, you brightened my day!

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  9. I surely enjoyed the collaboration. Well done. Amazing how such a short poem can create the volume of thoughts that ensue.

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  10. Your collaboration created a beautiful June day and a way forward. Thanks to both of you!

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  11. Lovely collaboration Ayaz & Peggy! Saying so much about June in so few words! Thanks for sharing. Good wishes, Chris

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    1. Thanks Christine, appreciate your kind words!

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  12. Thank you, Isha, for the following--

    A delightful poem from mid-summer of the happiness that surrounds a wedding day : one can almost see the bridal veil within these words.

    Yours sincerely
    Isha Wagner

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