Wednesday, September 21, 2016

Special Feature Collaborative Poem--By ayaz daryl nielsen and Peggy Dugan French--United States

A Day in June

By ayaz daryl nielsen and Peggy Dugan French

gladiola petals
softly fall from the bouquet
surrounded by all
cocooned in joy
and the songs we’ll sing
delight us
yes, I will answer

a new journey begins…
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30 comments:

  1. angeleeSeptember 21, 2016 at 7:23 PM

    very beautiful poem,congratulations ayaz and Peggy,love angelee

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    1. AnonymousSeptember 22, 2016 at 5:49 AM

      thank you, Angelee - you have a good today (and always)

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    2. pdfrenchSeptember 22, 2016 at 8:44 AM

      thank you angelee!

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  2. Jo BalistreriSeptember 21, 2016 at 7:31 PM

    What a lovely poem ayaz and Peggy. You work so well together. congratulations.

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    1. AnonymousSeptember 22, 2016 at 5:50 AM

      thank you, Jo - let's see more of your poetry, too!

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    2. pdfrenchSeptember 22, 2016 at 8:45 AM

      Thanks Jo, glad you enjoyed the piece!

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  3. NeenaSeptember 21, 2016 at 7:43 PM

    Filled with delight and hope...a beautiful collaboration! Congratulations to the talented poets ayaz daryl nielsen and Peggy Dugan.
    Thanks for sharing Karen.

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  4. UnknownSeptember 22, 2016 at 4:43 AM

    What a treat for the eyes and ears, well done to both of you
    Take care
    Annie

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  5. AnonymousSeptember 22, 2016 at 5:50 AM

    thanks, Annie. . .

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  6. AnonymousSeptember 22, 2016 at 10:33 AM

    and thank you Peggy Dugan French - such fun!

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  7. sheikha !September 22, 2016 at 10:49 AM

    such lovely and hopeful set of verses!

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  8. S. StefanowichSeptember 22, 2016 at 4:05 PM

    Hi Ayaz and Peggy

    A lovely day in June you both have collaborated beautifully on. Enjoyed the read!

    Sandra

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    1. pdfrenchSeptember 22, 2016 at 4:44 PM

      Thanks Sandra for your kind words!

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    2. AnonymousSeptember 23, 2016 at 10:10 AM

      yes, a thwack you from me, too - (oops, I mean, a thank you)

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  9. UnknownSeptember 22, 2016 at 4:54 PM

    Brightened my day. What a delightful poem. Hope to be reading more by the two of you.

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    1. AnonymousSeptember 23, 2016 at 10:11 AM

      your words brighten by day, thank you. . .

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    2. pdfrenchSeptember 24, 2016 at 9:47 AM

      Thanks Barbara, you brightened my day!

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  10. CharleneSeptember 22, 2016 at 5:30 PM

    I surely enjoyed the collaboration. Well done. Amazing how such a short poem can create the volume of thoughts that ensue.

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  11. UnknownSeptember 22, 2016 at 5:50 PM

    Your collaboration created a beautiful June day and a way forward. Thanks to both of you!

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  12. UnknownSeptember 23, 2016 at 1:29 PM

    Lovely collaboration Ayaz & Peggy! Saying so much about June in so few words! Thanks for sharing. Good wishes, Chris

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  13. Karen O'LearyOctober 6, 2016 at 4:47 PM

    Thank you, Isha, for the following--

    A delightful poem from mid-summer of the happiness that surrounds a wedding day : one can almost see the bridal veil within these words.

    Yours sincerely
    Isha Wagner

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