I want us to lay down in the long grass,
My head rested on your stomach,
Watching the heavens float by,
Holding hands and making small talk,
Between moments of quiet bliss,
I want to hear your heartbeat,
Feel it synchronise with my own,
Let minutes become hours,
Losing sight of tomorrow,
Alive in the present,
Counting each second as though
There is a lifetime between them,
Heads casually turning,
As we catch each other's eyes,
Something is exchanged between us,
Right at that point,
Something from deep inside,
All of a sudden, the world around us
becomes blurred, we are lost in each other,
Never to be found again.
Mike Brigden is a passionate writer best known under his
penname 'The Ordinary Poet'. His poems can be found on Facebook, Twitter, Instagram and
Vero. Mike is an incurable romantic who loves nothing better than to spend time
with his wife and kids who are very often his inspiration. He is fascinated,
awed and sometimes angered by the world around him, this is reflected within
his body of work.
Hi Ordinary Poet, if this poem is ordinary I sure want to read and see more of you work in Whispers. Thank you or sharing your poem with us.
ReplyDeleteBest wishes,
Inge
Thank you so much for your kind words. I look forward to sharing more of my work in the future.
Deleteamazing write
ReplyDeleteThank you Jack. That brought a huge smile to my face 😊
DeleteMike,
ReplyDeleteA great poem! Welcome to the site!
Your new friend,
David Fox
Thank you David
DeleteBeautiful poem, Mike. I love the passion in it. Thank you for sharing. Continued blessings!
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(www.creativeinspirationspp.blogspot.com)
Thank you Maurice your kind words are very much appreciated.
DeleteDear Mike,
ReplyDeleteWhat a joy to see the warm response you are receiving others. Your poem has a whimsical charm that has me smiling. Welcome to Whispers! I hope you are enjoying your time spent with us.
Blessings,
Karen
Thank you Karen, your kind words and welcome are very much appreciated.
DeleteDear Mike,
ReplyDeleteGreat closeness thoughts
Knight Writer
Thank you Yancy
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