Overcast in darkness
the thoughts inside my mind
Teardrops still remind me
of the love we left behind
All my dreams were shattered
on that night you said farewell
Hoping you would forgive me
now my life's a living hell
You're with me when I'm dreaming
but that's just make believe
With morning comes reality
there's no chance of a reprieve
One day I will recover
my broken heart will heal
These thoughts become memories
of a love I can't conceal
Allan Ball has retired from a career in the banking and financial
sector. Writing is both peaceful and rewarding, the written word allows
our hearts to speak. His poems have been published in anthologies.
I - like many others - can relate to this one! Very well expressed
ReplyDeleteHello Jack. Thank you for your kind words. Allan.
DeleteDear Allan,
ReplyDeleteA well written poem, a broken heart can heal, but it needs time.
Best wishes,
Inge
Hi Inge.You are always so supportive. Thank You. Allan.
DeleteAlan,
ReplyDeleteA very sad, but still very well written poem. Cheers to you!
Your friend,
David Fox
Hi David . I am pleased you enjoyed the poem. Thank You. Allan.
ReplyDeleteHi Allan. I so love your romantic poems. Nicely done. Thank you for sharing. Continued blessings!
ReplyDelete-MJ
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Hi Maurice. I'm so pleased you enjoy them. Thank you for such a lovely comment. Blessings Allan.
ReplyDeleteDear Allan,
ReplyDeleteTruly & truthfully told
Knight Writer