Doves burst skyward
like campfire flames
with detached embers
floating feather-like.
Coos echo from trees
much like logs popping
with fire.
Diane Webster's goal is to remain open to poetry ideas in everyday life or nature or an overheard phrase. Many nights she falls asleep juggling images to fit into a poem. Her work has appeared in Philadelphia Poets, Illya's Honey, River Poets Journal and other literary magazines.
Dear Diane,
ReplyDeleteWell imagined poem
I like it.
Knight Writer
I really liked this piece, also love sitting around a camp fire.
ReplyDeleteDear Diane,
ReplyDeleteI agree with Yancy, a well crafted poem with a lot imagery.
Thank you for sharing.
Best wishes,
Inge
lovely vivid descriptions
ReplyDeleteHello Diane. I enjoyed your well-written, imagery-filled poem. Thank you for sharing. Continued blessings!
ReplyDelete-MJ
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Diane,
ReplyDeleteI loved this short creative poem.
Yours truly,
David Fox