Tuesday, May 7, 2013

York In Bloom--By Joann Grisetti--United States

York In Bloom

blustery wind
pushes round Clifford’s Tower
almost a spring day
daffodils nod to the sky
“Here sun, have some yellow”

Joann Grisetti has been writing for 45 years. She is a retired teacher from Florida. She receives encouragement from her daughter and has recently enrolled in a creative writing workshop. She is a member of Poetry Soup. You can read more of her poetry there.
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4 comments:

  1. PixordiaMay 7, 2013 at 11:41 AM

    I love the generosity of the daffodils offering their yellow to the most yellow of all.
    Excellent write.
    SuZ

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  2. Rhoda GalgianiMay 8, 2013 at 5:48 PM

    Daffodils are a Spring's treat - I love seeing them nod their little heads...

    Rhoda Galgiani

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  3. Kathryn CollinsMay 9, 2013 at 8:22 AM

    Hi Joann:

    Set against the picture of the tower I saw through google, I can feel it and see it. "Here sun, have some yellow” is the most remarkable line. Bravo!

    love,
    Kathy

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  4. ranu uniyalMay 10, 2013 at 9:37 AM

    Last line sums it up beautifully. Well done Joann.
    love
    ranu

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