Lanterne String
Coy
red
flirting
butterflies
make shy poppies
blush
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Veiled Threat
sand
flying
hazily
in a desert
storm
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Sharing
sign
language
bodily
movements replace
words
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Paul Callus is a Maltese author who writes both in Maltese and English. He has contributed to several anthologies. Apart from poetry he writes lyrics for songs and has published two books, one a story book aimed at children (related to his experience as a teacher) and a historical book based on research.
Thank you, Beth Winchcombe, for the following--
ReplyDeleteI had to keep reading it again and again. It's not just beautiful words, BUT so cleverly written...I love it. Many thanks for sharing it with Whispers.
Many thanks Beth; your reaction to these short Lanternes is indeed lovely and encouraging! All the best. // paul
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ReplyDeleteGood lantunes. I have written a few, learned something new while "haring" I did not know they (laturnes) could be about anything besides tthe seasons.
David
Hi David; I am not sure about the 'seasons' reference, but I have read several that tackle various topics, so I go with the flow! Thank you for reading and commenting. All the best. // paul
DeleteThese are incredible! I truly loved reading these works of art. You sure put a lot of thought into these Lanternes Paul. I really enjoyed reading them this morning.
ReplyDeleteI'm flattered by your delightful comments, Rusty! Am so pleased that you found them to your liking. // paul
Deletevery, very clever, my friend - awesome
ReplyDeleteI'm touched by your 'awesome' comment, my friend. Hope you're keeping well. // paul
DeleteNice poetry, Paul. All three are splendid. I really enjoyed them. Thank you for sharing and continued blessings!
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Thank you Maurice; your words of encouragement are much appreciated. God bless! // paul
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ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading your lanternes. Lovely imagery presented in each one. Thank you for sharing these with us all.
Sandra
I am pleased that you enjoyed these lanterns, Sandra. Thank you for reading. // paul
DeleteI really enjoyed your work!
ReplyDeleteThank you Peggy; positive feedback is most encouraging. // paul
DeleteOh Paul...these are uniquely you and just lovely! They gave me that aha! moment I always seek! Thank you for the smiles these created. Aloha, Connie
ReplyDeleteHi Connie, thank you for the lovely feedback, and sorry for the late reply. Keeping you and yours in my prayers. God bless. ~ paul
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