Saturday, June 13, 2015

Special Feature Collaborative Poem--By John Judson Roe IV and David Fox--United States

Helping Children Smile

By John Judson Roe IV and David Fox

The weather is a bit sunny
Yet still sort of cold
Exciting for the children
Who are getting kind of old
They're anxious for Summer
That will end winter’s cold
The beaches are enticing
Beneath the sunny skies
Is where they go
when the rain dries.

21 comments:

  1. Dear John and David,

    It's good to see you already have a comment on your uplifting poem. I'm smiling again! Congratulations to both of you. Welcome to Whispers John! Keep on writing and sharing your words.

    Blessings,
    Karen

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  2. This is a sweet poem, John and David. You've collaborated well. :)

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  3. Hi John & David. Thanks for sharing your delightful poem!! I love the ocean & so grateful to be able to stroll along the shore with my hubby before those frigid winter days are once again upon us. I'm just a big kid at heart! Good wishes...Chris~

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  4. A poem filled with lovely imagery and thoughts to ponder upon, a wonderful co-write John and David, .... Leokadia

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  5. The child in me rejoiced over and over again, lovely this is :-)

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  6. Thank you all! This collaboration was a long time coming. He does intend to post more of is poetry, watch for them!

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  7. Such a joyful poem to make the reader smile. Reminds me that summer is just
    around the corner- if the English weather would make up it`s mind lol.
    Well written.
    Regards,
    Yvonne

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  8. Lovely poem, nice imagery! I love summer fun, and thank you both for sharing.

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  9. What a delightful poem. This was a glorious read, I loved every heart-loving line of this incredible piece. Thank you for sharing it with us. Great work both of you.

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  10. The first day of Summer is always the best.

    Fine collaboration here. Very much enjoyed.

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  11. Yvonne, Rusty, Marlene and Michael,
    Thank you all for the nice. comments. I am sure he will enjoy them too!
    Your friend,
    David Fox

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  12. Hi David and John. I enjoyed your collaboration. It is beautifully written and full of imagery. Thank you for sharing and continued blessings!

    -MJ (www.tgbtgpublictions.com)

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    1. MJ,
      Thanks for your blessings...John Judson Roe IV is part of my group at the program I facilitate, at my program UCP (United Cerebral Palsy), but you don't have to have Cerebral palsy to attend.
      Yours truly,
      David Fox

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  13. Dear David and John,

    I enjoyed reading your collaboration it brought me back to my childhood days when I was waiting for Spring to come after a cold Winter. You both caught the essence of that in your poem. Well done!

    Sandra

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  14. Thank you, Robert Dufresne, for the following--

    A nice light uplifting poem targeting the excitement of spring and last day of school ! The title is almost ironical in that we the readers are the children whom you have helped smile. Well done gentlemen.

    Bob D

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  15. Sandra and John,
    Thank you both for your kind comments!
    Yours truly,
    David Fox

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  16. Peggy,
    I appreciate your comment, and when John gets a chance to read all the comments, I know he will too! A great job you are doing publishing "Shemom"!
    Your friend,
    David Fox

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  17. Karen,
    Have you mailed John the comments? He is anxiously waiting what they have to say!'
    David

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  18. This is a delightful poem that left a smile on my face! A great colab John and David! Aloha, Connie

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