We May Meet Again
By Terry O’Leary
Beneath long lashes, misty clad,
Your limpid eyes are sometimes sad;
They bring to mind a homeless waif
Engulfed in rain with nowhere safe
Most times I find a cheerful light
Within your eyes that sparkles bright,
And though my thoughts I try to hide
My happiness wells up inside
At dawn I see your eyes aglow
Like founts through which your passions flow;
And when I’m low they always loom
Like morning glories through the gloom
Your smile ashine beneath my gaze
Effulgent eyes beam all ablaze:
A look, a touch, a kiss I yearn,
You slowly make my body burn
While at your side and in a heap
I scanned your eyes, half closed, asleep,
And as you slept with pillow clutched,
Your eyelids with my lips I touched
And if you’ve ever wondered why
I try to search within each eye,
Though past is past, your eyes remind
Of bygone times when love was kind
Yet, though your eyes still cast a spell
They seem to bid a fond farewell,
Reflecting but a fading storm
Although I know your thoughts are warm
But now our paths will part, alas,
For good things always come to pass;
Perhaps it lies within God’s ken
That someday we may meet again
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From the editor--It is a pleasure to announce that Terry O’Leary is August’s Poet of the Month. He is a talented writer accomplished in a variety of forms. Readers at Whispers enjoy his work. Terry has been an encouraging voice in our community since 2013, regularly leaving thoughtful comments which others appreciate. And if you are wondering, we are not related. This award was truly earned!
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Thoughts on “We May Meet Again”--When Terry sent me this poem, I was immediately drawn to the stair casing format which enhances the artistic experience. In poetry, details matter. The rhyme flows easily giving his poem a whimsical feel that works well for the subject matter. The imagery helps the reader experience what Terry conveys. It is evident that he has delivered a truly remarkable poem. Maybe some day the two will meet again.
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Congratulations and thank you Terry! I appreciate all you do and have done for Whispers.
Sincerely,
Karen O’Leary, Editor
Terry what a lovely poem, well-written and oh so romantic. Who in the world in their right mind would want to leave such love and adoration. It is often that the heart's most poignant emotions, that should be spoken are left inside as hidden treasures not willing to be shared with a loved one for fear of ridicule or rejection. This poem shows your wonderful talent. Congratulations for being named poet of the month.
ReplyDeleteA well deserved honor.
Love, Charlene
Thank you, Charlene!
DeleteYes, sometimes those emotions are hidden inside... sometimes written in lines which are also hidden... well, this time, the whole Whispers World can have a peek... ;-))
Terry
Dear Terry,
ReplyDeleteCongratulations on being selected Poet of the Month! You're a wonderful writer and I'm so glad you received this honor.
While reading your poem, I kept thinking about the little girl (Cosette) in Les Miserables. She was but a poor waif when Jean Valjean kept a promise to her mother and found her. Before Cosette entered his life, Valjean had little reason to go on, but with her at his side he never stopped smiling.
Just like the girl/woman in your poem, he had to let her leave when she fell in love. It was very difficult for him, just as it was described in your beautiful poem. It's been said that sometimes love means letting go. Nonetheless, it's a sad experience.
So glad you left the door open in case she wishes to return. You have a kind heart, Terry.
Love,
Carolyn
Thank you, Carolyn!
DeleteYes, there are so many ways a love can be experienced, expressed, won or lost...
I'm happy you enjoyed it... ;-))
Terry
Terry,
ReplyDeleteA lovely poem. You did a fine job on it. Kudos on being named Poet of the Month. (By the way, Karen. thanks for telling us the two of you are not related. I was beginning to wonder...)
Your friend,
David Fox
Thank you, David!
DeleteYes, I was surprised, flattered, happy to be named 'Poet of the Month'!!!
Thanks for your support...
Terry
Congratulations Terry on being named Poet of the Month on Whispers. Your poems have great flow and emotion along with poignant imagery. It is a pleasure to read your work. Bob
ReplyDeleteThank you for your kind words, Bob!
DeleteI'm happy you enjoyed!!
Terry
Thank you, Isha Wagner, for the following--
ReplyDeleteA truly delightful poem with joy and sadness mixed and the perverse human condition woven so well into the rhyming words. Reading it again and again it becomes musical and could be sung more easily than spoken. This is fine verse.
Yours sincerely,
Isha Wagner
Thank you, Isha!
DeleteI'm happy you enjoyed it...
and that you read it 'again and again' brings me joy... ;-)))
Terry
Terry,
ReplyDeleteUniquely creative work that has good rhythm, rhyme, and flow..I enjoyed reading it today..
Sara
Thank you for your kind words, Sara!
DeleteI'm glad you enjoyed it... :-))
Terry
Thank you, Arthur Ford, for the following--
ReplyDeleteBRILLIANT POEM!!!!!!
The 5th stanza, 4th line creates such obsequious depth; I'm not
sure if that has ever been said before!!!!
MORE!MORE!MORE!
arthur c. ford,sr.,poet/editor
www.thepoetbandcompany.yolasite.com
Thank you, Arthur!!!
DeleteThank you, Arthur!!!
DeleteThank you, Christina Jussaume, for the following--
ReplyDeleteI went on to read this poem… and it was indeed lovely.
God bless Christina
Thank you Christina... Much appreciated!
DeleteTerry
Thank you Christina... Much appreciated!
DeleteTerry
Thank you, David Austin, for the following--
ReplyDeleteMy congratulations to Terry.
Thank you, David!!
DeleteTerry O'Leary, this honor makes me cheery
ReplyDeleteFor you in all the rhymes you do - though some may make one teary
Congrats on being selected
Like being so injected
With happiness and joy, you see
Blessings bestowed on we and thee!
Your poem is lovely, too !
No more to say and do - except A BIG, HEARTY, CONGRATULATIONS TO YOU!
Sheri / www.poetryandbeyond.net
Thank you, Sheri!
Delete"injected with happiness and joy'... wow... :-)))
Terry
Terry, congratulations on being named the Poet of the Month at Whispers. What a special honor for a very deserving poet and writer. "We May Meet Again" is a testament of the heartfelt, passionate poetry we have become accustomed to from you. Great honor and great poem. Thank you for sharing and continued blessings!
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Thank you, Maurice!
DeleteYou are very kind!!
Terry
Terry, each line touched me deeply in a wonderful way, even with the sadness. Thank you for sharing all your wonderful words with us. This has been a joy to read.
ReplyDeletePam
Thank you, Pam!!
DeleteIt was a joy to write... :-)
If I can touch someone 'deeply'... then I am deeply pleased...
Terry
Congratulations Terry on being selected Poet of the Month! This is a lovely, romantic and touching poem. Love the flow and rhyme. Excellent work. The positive final verse looks ahead with hope. // paul
ReplyDeleteThank you, Paul!
DeleteThank you, Paul!
DeleteVery Nicely Done
ReplyDeleteThank you, Mary!
DeleteThank you, Mary!
DeleteThank you, Jack Horne, for the following--
ReplyDeleteSo glad to see you as Poet of the Month, my friend. Love this beautiful and beautifully flowing poem.
Thank you, Jack...You are always so kind!!!
DeleteThank you, Jack...You are always so kind!!!
Deletehi terry your amazing I would love to know where you are from
ReplyDeleteThank you... I was bought up in Hollywood, Calif.
DeleteThank you... I was bought up in Hollywood, Calif.
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