Snow Falling
the newborn lamb
curled in its steam . . .
snow falling
a tiny life
changing to white . . .
snow falling
the one breath
of a huddled flock . . .
snow falling
Ron C. Moss is a Tasmania visual artist, poet and lover of haiku. His poetry has won international awards and been translated into several languages. Ron's art is sold as limited edition-prints and originals. He has been featured in poetry journals and has designed several award winning poetry books. Ron is a two time winner of the Haiku Society of America International renku competition, and he is a current member on the Haiku Society of America. Please check out Ron’s website--www.ronmoss.com
Ron - beautiful visuals! Very creative! Sheri / www.poetryandbeyond.net
ReplyDeleteI can just picture this vision of white....serenity painted with words,
ReplyDeleteSuZ
Ron,
ReplyDeleteVery nice imagery...living in America suffering through Summer...I sometimes forget it is Winter down where you are. I love looking at snow, it is so gorgeous, so long as I don't have to travel in it. Love the repetition in your haiku.
~David Fox
You write a great visual bringing to life 'a new life' with your poetry...Rhoda / Expressions - chesakat1.blogspot.com
ReplyDeleteNice view and scenery, Ron. A delightful poem. Thank you for sharing and continued blessings!
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ReplyDeleteRon - beautiful write
Loved the visuals. Well done, best wishes. Pete.
ReplyDeleteRon, what a lovely well-written visual. I could easily see the steam rising up off the new born lamb. Thank you for sharing your wonderful talent.
ReplyDeleteLove, Charlene