Saturday, September 13, 2014

As the Heart of Spring--By ayaz daryl nielsen--United States

As the Heart of Spring

You spread the wings of Spring
You are the soft rain’s first blooms
And legends will be about you
Legends of enchanted beginnings

ayaz daryl nielsen is a husband, father, veteran, x-roughneck (as on oil rigs)/hospice nurse, editor of bear creek haiku (25+ years/120+ issues), homes include Lilliput Review, Jellyfish, Whispers, Shamrock, and! bearcreekhaiku.blogspot.com (translates as joie de vivre)
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19 comments:

  1. AnonymousSeptember 13, 2014 at 12:34 PM

    I look forward to more from this poet
    Maureen

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    1. AnonymousOctober 5, 2014 at 11:56 AM

      thank you, Maureen, for your gracious comment - best - ayaz daryl nielsen

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  2. Karen O'LearySeptember 13, 2014 at 1:24 PM

    Dear ayaz,

    It's good to see you have a comment wanting to see more of your writing here. I do too. Welcome to Whispers! I hope you enjoy your time spent here. Please let me know if you have any questions.

    Best wishes,
    Karen

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    1. AnonymousOctober 5, 2014 at 11:58 AM

      thanks, Karen, appreciating deeply your website - (should have discovered it years ago) - ayaz daryl nielsen

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  3. CharleneSeptember 13, 2014 at 8:29 PM

    ayaz, welcome to Whispers. I enjoyed the beautiful poem that reminds me of a lovely song we learned when I was in Choir in High School called "All the things you are".. The first line goes like this, "You are the promised kiss of springtime". Thank you for sharing your talent. I too am looking forward to more of it here on Whispers.
    Charlene .

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    1. AnonymousOctober 5, 2014 at 12:00 PM

      and thank you, Charlene - a gracious comment on the fine place you are (must be) from - best - ayaz daryl nielsen

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  4. UnknownSeptember 14, 2014 at 7:58 AM

    Ayza, I like how creatively you begin with just 6 syllables and increase to 9 by poem's ending........ I also love you give spring a great and legendary personality and eternal celebration! Awesomely written! Sheri / www.poetryandbeyond.net

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    1. AnonymousOctober 5, 2014 at 12:01 PM

      Sheri, nourishing words, and they are appreciated - ayaz daryl nielsen

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  5. UnknownSeptember 14, 2014 at 11:50 PM

    A lovely conveyance of spring in its detail and awesome size. A joy indeed. Ralph.

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    1. AnonymousOctober 5, 2014 at 12:03 PM

      also makes me feel a bit joyful reading your comment - there must be a little local (joyous) trouble I can get into with this energy you've sent - best - ayaz daryl nielsen

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  6. AnonymousSeptember 15, 2014 at 1:58 PM

    Hi Ayza. Welcome to Whispers. I enjoyed reading your poem, "As the Heart of Spring." Nice write. Thank you for sharing and continued blessings!

    -MJ (www.tgbtgpublictions.com)

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    1. AnonymousOctober 5, 2014 at 12:04 PM

      and blessings (mixed with smiles) to you, too - ayaz daryl nielsen

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  7. NdabaSeptember 20, 2014 at 7:33 AM

    l enjoyed devouring this beautiful piece, Ayza.

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    1. AnonymousOctober 5, 2014 at 12:05 PM

      thanks, Nbada - the very best to your day - ayaz daryl nielsen

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  8. PixordiaSeptember 29, 2014 at 11:46 PM

    HI Ayza:This is a really delightful poem about my favorite time of year.
    I look forward to seeing more of your work.
    SuZ

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    1. AnonymousOctober 5, 2014 at 12:06 PM

      SuZ - and I deeply appreciate your comment, gracious person - best - ayaz daryl nielsen

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  9. LavanaOctober 2, 2014 at 3:27 AM

    Beautiful poem...
    Regards

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    1. AnonymousOctober 5, 2014 at 12:07 PM

      Lavana - thank you, and, very best to you - ayaz daryl nielsen

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  10. UnknownOctober 26, 2014 at 6:48 PM

    Ayaz,
    A wonderfully crafted poem. Short but sweet!
    Your friend,
    David Fox

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