Friday, May 1, 2015

further--By ayaz daryl nielsen--United States

further

unkempt words, joining
unfolding, becoming
wayward byways
of resilience, of
heightened awareness,
seemingly pursued
to further
resplendent
byways
  beckoning
    from just beyond
      an everyday thought

ayaz daryl nielsen is a husband, father, veteran, x-roughneck (as on oil rigs)/hospice nurse, editor of bear creek haiku (25+ years/120+ issues), homes include Lilliput Review, Jellyfish, Whispers, Shamrock, and! bearcreekhaiku.blogspot.com (translates as joie de vivre)

9 comments:

  1. Excellent work ayaz...as always!!

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    1. thank you, friend, and writing/editor cohort -

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  2. Hello, Ayaz, it is always so fun to read your work to see how you will balance your words and flow as you do so creatively! Great one again! Sheri

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    1. She Sta, you continue to be so much more photogenic the I - and, best to you and your day - thanks -

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  3. Nicely done, ayaz. A very intriguing poem. Thank you for sharing and continued blessings!

    -MJ (www.tgbtgpublictions.com)

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  4. Always a pleasure to read one of your poems. Thank you--and am looking forward to the next Bear Creek Haiku. Well done, my friend.

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  5. Strong message wrapped up in just a few words; great writ!

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  6. Excellent work, I really enjoyed reading your poem this evening!

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