in my dreams
By Peggy Dugan French
you
across the table
still
30 years ago
we were surrounded
by family and friends
now we have a seasoned past
to keep us company
the kids
old friends
a grab bag of memories
pains, sorrows, pleasures, joys
still
whether it be across the breakfast table
or a candlelit dinner
we brave the future side by side
not knowing where the path will lead
but always full of faith in us
now
sifting through the decades we’ve traveled
since embarking on this journey
i smile with remembrance
of our days of youth
and discovery
gently reminding me
that every twist and turn through the years
steered me in the right direction
always to you
yesterday
and today
the man of my dreams
still
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From the editor--It is an pleasure to announce that Peggy Dugan French is May’s Poet of the Month. She is a talented published writer and the editor of Shemom. Readers at Whispers enjoy her creative poetry. Peggy is an uplifting voice at our online journal, regularly leaving thoughtful comments which others appreciate. She has collaborated with a writing friend on poems that have been featured at Whispers. She regularly shares her talent by participating in our community activities. Peggy’s honor is richly deserved.
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Thoughts on “ in my dreams”--Right away, I was drawn to the artistic presentation of Peggy’s poem. Her clever use of spacing gives the reader a chance to pause and absorb what she has to say before moving on to the next stanza. As I journeyed along with Peggy, I found my self relating to facets of my own life. Drawing the reader in is so important to a successful poem. This is truly a different slant on a love poem, one with depth and honesty. Her talent is evident in this wonderful piece.
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Congratulations and thank you Peggy! I appreciate all you do and have done for Whispers.
Sincerely,
Karen O’Leary, Editor
This is a phenomenal piece of writing, to weave emotion and history together like this.
ReplyDeleteJust wonderful, Peggy...
Congratulations, as well for being recognized this month, deservedly so.
Thank you Michael! I really appreciate your comments. I am glad you enjoyed the piece!
DeletePeggy, I like how you blend and sew through each emotion expressed. Beautifully written. Sheri
ReplyDeleteThank you Sheri, I appreciate your comments!
DeleteExcuse me, but in my haste to comment on your lovely poem I forgot to totally congratulate you on this Poet of The Month honor! Again, CONGRATULATIONS! Sheri
DeleteThank you Sheri!!
Deletevery beautiful - and congrats on your honour
ReplyDeleteThank you Jack!
DeletePeggy,
ReplyDeleteI love this! Keep up the good work.
Your friend,
David Fox
Thank you so much David, glad you enjoyed the piece!
Deletevery lovely
ReplyDeleteThank you Joan!
DeleteThis is a breathtaking poem, I really enjoyed reading it tonight! Your voice is surely heard through this lovely poem. Congratulations on your honor!!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Rusty, I appreciate you kind words and am glad you enjoyed the piece!
DeleteThank you, Isha Wagner, for the following--
ReplyDeleteWhat strikes me most about this poem is the confidence and faith that emerges from a marriage that endured through all seasons; all the tumults through the years; the joys and grievances that a relationship of two people can bring : still the desire to continue remains and even strengthened by the promise of what the future may hold. A pleasure to read.
Yours sincerely,
Isha Wagner
Thank you Isha for your very kind words about my piece, I really appreciate your comments. I am glad that you enjoyed the piece.
Deletelovely, Peggy! you so deserve this recognition!
ReplyDeleteThanks ayaz! Great to hear from you.
DeleteI loved this Peggy! Congratulations :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you Vasanthi! :)
DeleteCongratulations! An achievement in life and a talent to match. It reads like stepping stones, then you get the bigger picture of the journey. An impressive piece. Ralph
ReplyDeleteThank you Ralph, I appreciate your comments, I love the stepping stones comment, perfect!
DeleteSuch a lovely, lovely poem! Congratulations Peggy!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Sheikha, glad you enjoyed the piece!
DeleteCongrats Peggy well deserved. Pete.
ReplyDeleteThank you Pete!
DeleteBeautiful Poem...Congratulations Peggy!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much!
DeleteCongratulations on being selected "Poet on the Month" Peggy. Enjoyed reading your heartfelt poem! Best wishes, Chris~
ReplyDeleteThank you Christine, glad you enjoyed the piece!
DeleteNice job, Peggy. Congratulations on winning POM. A worthy honor. Dan Tharp
ReplyDeleteThank you Dan!
DeleteYou can officially call yourself a poet when asked "what do you do?" Congratulations! I love the poem, going from the familial "hey you" to the still, still, now, always, still. This is beautiful. Love, Deb
ReplyDeleteThanks Deb, I really appreciate your heartfelt comments. Much love, Peg
DeleteThank you, Beth Winchcombe, for the following--
ReplyDeleteToday, my husband and I celebrate our 58th. Wedding Anniversary. We've had our ups and downs, we've not always agreed but like Peggy's poem, we've traveled together through life, and will carry on ' till death do us part.' There's a huge difference between being ' in love' and ' love,' The passion of ' in love'...then the caring that comes from ' true love.' Peggy describes this so well, it's a wonderful poem full of meaning. Thank you Peggy for sharing this with us all.
Love from Beth
Thank you so much Beth for your kind words and Congratulyon your 58th anniversary!!!
DeleteThank you, Aju, for the following--
ReplyDeleteCongratulation to Ms. Peggy Dugan French!
Aju Mukhoipadhyay
Thanks Aju!
DeleteThank you Peggy for sharing your amazing poetry and congratulations on your well deserved 'Poet of the Month'. Love and Sincerely--Barbara
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Barbara! Glad you enjoyed the piece
DeleteLovely poem. The simplicity and beauty left me smiling. The play with history, emotion, romance, faith, belief and just that flow that shows love rules conquering every concern to bring us to better days is something that left me smiling.
ReplyDeleteWell done Peggy on such a nice poem and congratulations on being the poet of the month... You are quite deserving. Cheers!
Thank you so much Su'eddie for you kind words- I am glad that the piece made you smile and that you enjoyed it.
ReplyDeleteCongratulation for this honor of being Poet of the Month.
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your journey of love and partnership. So few have the real love and acceptance it takes to achieve this kind of enduring love. My hubby and I celebrated 44 years together last December and stil feel wel have a deep love. Feeling blessed.
Sincerely,
Suzanne
Thank you Suzanne for your kind words - I so appreciate them. Congratulations on your 44th anniversary!!
ReplyDeleteCongratulations Peggy on being named Whispers Poet of the Month for May 2015, a significant achievement. My wife and I are at the age described in your poem and even our grandchildren are most all grown with families of their own. Still there are memories, good and bad, of the life we have had. Thanks for your insightful poem. Robert
ReplyDeleteThank you for your kink words Robert! Glad you enjoyed the piece.
DeleteCongratulations Peggy!! "steered me in the right direction" is what most impressed me. You and your husband have travelled together through highs and lows, but always followed the right path, thanks to love and faith. My wife and I are lucky to have been happily married for 42 years! May you have many more bright days together! // paul
ReplyDeleteThank you Paul, appreciate your comments!
DeleteHi Peggy. What a wonderful, touching poem. I really enjoyed this. Nice and soft; meaningful and passionate. Thank you for sharing and congratulations on being named Poet of the Month. Continued blessings to you!
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Thank you so much Maurice!
DeleteWhat a beautiful tribute to married love, Peggy!
ReplyDeleteThanks Marianne!
DeleteThank you, Gerald McBreen, for the following--
ReplyDeletePeggy Dugan French an excellent choice for "Poet of the Month."
And a wonderful poem to represent her.
Thank you so much Gerald!
DeleteNice job, Peggy.
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