Tuesday, May 5, 2015

Gentle Breeze - A Love Poem--By Michael Todd--United States

Gentle Breeze - A Love Poem

I love you more than mere words can express,
Would there was a way my thoughts to contain;
No cunning notions for you to address,
Just me speaking to you, in words arcane.

I love you more that flowers love the rain,
Heavenly blessing sent to earth below;
Make sense of this topsy turvy domain,
When it goes well with you, style apropos.

I love you more than you will ever know,
With all I am and all I would possess.
Your waltzing eyes dealt my stone heart a blow;
Drift before me in your red dancing dress.

Some say love comes with thunder, lightning, keys;
Our love is carried... on a gentle breeze.

Michael Todd aka Myke Todd has been writing and posting stories and poetry on social networking sites since 2006. He can currently be found at his dedicated poetry site... http://myketodd.blogspot.com/

34 comments:

  1. Absolutely Lovely Michael !!

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    1. Thank you, Drew. You are far too kind.

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  2. I love the feeling of feeling love when silently observing the object that causes such spontaneous reactions...well said as always.

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    1. Thank you, Barb. You are a true romantic at heart, so to have to say what you did, makes me all kinds of happy.

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    1. Many thank yous, Maureen... So nice to hear from down under. :)

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  4. Beautifully heartbreaking as most great ends are. To be the end of this is to the end off good things. Ever yours, ~Mimi

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    1. Some times we are rushed to the ends, Mimi. Other times, when fortune smiles on us, what we have becomes static, as if suspended in time, and these can be the best of times, where even time is not binding. Something like that. :)

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  5. Michael, I ask, who wouldn't or couldn't love you in return after reading this heart-grabbing poem? Easily, it would stir a dead heart to beating again! Bring life to a wilting rose! Ah! Sheri

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    1. Sheri, if I could bring life to a wilting rose, I could manage anything. There was a time I thought I was capable of such, but I was wrong. Truth be told, though, it was sure fun trying...

      Thanks for your very kind words. You always leave me smiling with heart felt observations. You have a gift, and share it well.

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  6. The most beautiful love poems are those that are simple and true. This is the most touching and endearing love poem I've read in a long time. It truly makes me sigh.

    <3

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    1. These feelings just sort of sneak up on a person, and tap lightly on the shoulder. No more announcement than that is required.

      Thanks bunches for coming to call, Dahlia. You make me happy.

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    1. Thanks, Christopher. I appreciate you coming by.

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    1. So happy this resonates with you, Demme. Thank you.

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  9. awweee you write a beautiful love poem Michael.
    xxxx

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    1. Thanks, Divinia... I get smitten, and the inevitable ensues... :)

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  10. Words conjure many emotions...Your poem made me smile, & because I'm a "hopeless" romantic, they made me love LOVE even more! Thanks Michael for a LOVELY poem...Best wishes, Chris~

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    1. Chris, from all you say here, I would say, you are what I call a hopeful romantic, and that is the best way to be... Thanks!

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  11. Hi Michael. Thank you for sharing such a tender and touching love poem. I really enjoyed it. Continued blessings!

    -MJ (www.tgbtgpublictions.com)

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  12. Hello, Maurice. Glad you like this little poem.

    Thanks for the shout out.

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  13. Such a touching and romantic poem. I loved the sweet, gentleness of it. Beautiful! Dropping by since you came by to see my silly Victoria Day ditty which was very kind of you.

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  14. I tried to comment on this the other day. Dang google kicked me out lol. But i wanted you to know that I really enjoyed this. It was a very sweet read :)

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    1. Thanks, Laura... Very nice of you to come back and perservere. But, isn't that just like you? ;)

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  15. Very touching love story Myke and will certainly spark memories in the minds of many readers. Bob

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    1. I could not hope for more than that outcome, Bob. Thank you, Sir.

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  16. Really good!!! You have so much talent!

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    1. Thank you. Just credit the inspiration. I was just the lucky person it came to.

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  17. so very beautiful!! and lasting love indeed comes on a gentle breeze , Love this touching side of you Myke

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    1. Thank you, Linda. The moments spent writing this poem, will be cherished for some time to come.

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  18. This is just beautiful. Love each linr,,,

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