blackout...
a million stars
switch on
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swinging in the rain
myriad droplets
spray from my hair
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summer hols
-- the jamun tree
ripe with boys
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yellow leaves
grandma sweeps up
yesterday
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headless statue –
long before me
and long after
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Raamesh Gowri Raghavan moonlights as an award-winning copywriter by day and daylights as an award-wanting poet by night. He thinks he is funny, but his friends vehemently disagree.
Hi, Ramesh! I am mesmerized by your very clever Haiku. Love the balance and flow, too......... that is, with the meaning and intent...... Sheri
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Sheri!
DeleteRaamesh, I really enjoyed your haiku. All of them are unique and wonderful.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Peggy!
DeleteDear Raamesh,
ReplyDeleteIt's good to see you already have two wonderful comments on your creative haiku. Welcome to Whispers! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with all your writing endeavors.
Blessings,
Karen
Thank you so much for this opportunity, Karen. I'd love to continue and deepen this relationship with Whispers.
DeleteI thought you have done an excellent job with these Haiku. My favorite one is the second one. Myriad droplets, how perfect that is!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Rusty.
Deletelove the thought of that tree ripe with boys...
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Maureen. Climbing jamun trees is a cherished childhood memory.
Deletehave so enjoyed these Haiku. they are all refreshing and full of experience. thanks for sharing. Ralph.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Ralph.
DeleteThis is a delightful string of haiku, Raamesh! The imagery is lovely. I am very much impressed. // paul
ReplyDeleteMuch obliged, Paul!
DeleteRaamesh,
ReplyDeleteLoved these. Fresh will depth and insight!
~Davidf
Much thanks!
DeleteHello Raamesh. Loved the haiku, especially the forth one. Thank you for sharing and continued blessings!
ReplyDelete-MJ (www.tgbtgpublictions.com)
Thank you so much for liking them!
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