Saturday, May 9, 2015

Lost--By Vasanthi S. Pillai--India

Lost

Smoothly penetrating
into the numbness of time
and breathing calmly through
the long pauses,
everything around dissolves,
seeking invisibility,
to experience a hollow peace by
meditating on the randomness
of an empty world.

Vasanthi is a dreamer who completely enjoys writing and reading poetry, and every piece of her work is the result of a conversation with her soul.

11 comments:

  1. Yes, truly that is what it is, "a result of conversation with one's soul" - beautiful! Sheri

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  2. Dear Vasanthi,

    It is a joy to see that you already have one lovely comment on your insightful poem. Welcome to Whispers! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with all your writing endeavors.

    Blessings,
    Karen

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  3. Very nice piece, Vasanthi. Welcome to Whispers and thank you for sharing your deep, well-written poem with us. Continued blessings to you!

    -MJ (www.tgbtgpublictions.com)

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    1. Thank you so much Maurice, Indeed 'Whispers' is filled with such beautiful people !

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    1. One word that summed it up, thank you for posting !

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  5. I just love deep poetry, it inspires me so. Your poem was very focused and filled with amazing perfection that I hardly knew that I was reading, because I was feeling your words. Awesome work.

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    1. Thank you so much for such kind words, so encouraging.

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  6. Vasanthi,
    Such a tranquil poem. I loved it! Welcome to Whispers!
    Your new friend,
    David Fox

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    1. Hi David ! Thank you for making me feel home.

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