Creating
In a cozy café
Of soft repose
I write a harmony
of original and
aesthetic masterpieces
In rhythm with the rain.
David Fox’s writing has appeared in over 100 venues, including newsletters, blogs, print journals and websites. He has been published in the U.K., Canada, India, Finland and the U.A.E. He edits a print journal, The Poet's Art, (see his ad in the Whispers Ad column).
This reads like a dedication, which in a way, I suppose, it is...
ReplyDeleteI am very impressed that you wrote it, David, but even more so, that this is your thought process. I mean that in the best of ways.
I enjoyed your piece David!
ReplyDeleteAhhh one of my favorite sounds. Music to my ears. I enjoyed your lovely poem David.
ReplyDeleteThis is a truly beautiful and meaningful piece. This poem is certainly written via the rhythm of the rain, a well crafted work, good job,
ReplyDeleteRussell
Nice work, David. Soft tone and uplifting writing. Thank you for sharing and continued blessings!
ReplyDeleteHello Allison and welcome to Whispers! I have really enjoyed your poem, "I have to push deep." The spiritual tone of it is uplifting and it is well-written. Thank you for sharing and continued blessings!
-MJ (www.tgbtgpublictions.com)
Everyone,
ReplyDeleteThank you for your comments. They are very much appreciated.
David Fox
Hi David, Nothing as soothing as the rhythm of the rain. Nice poem, enjoyed reading it! Good wishes, Chris~
ReplyDeleteChris,
ReplyDeleteThe rhythm of the rain is soothing, isn't it? Thanks for commenting.
Your friend,
David Fox
Thank you, Robert Hinshaw, for the following--
ReplyDeleteFor David Fox: Many thanks for your gracious remarks re my poem, "The Widows Walk". I thoroughly enjoyed reading your splendid poem in this months issue of Whispers - so creative and delightful. Best to you as you continue your poetical journey. Bob Hinshaw
"A cozy cafe/of soft repose" is not only a nice image, David, but also a harmonious sound.
ReplyDeletevery lovely write
ReplyDeleteThank you, Gerald Heyder, for the following--
ReplyDeleteDear David, your poem "Creating"is short, sweet, and to the point! Yes, rain does have rhythm to it, and it can be conducive to composing verse. Do you remember a song from the 1960's by the Cascades called "Rhythm and the Falling Rain?"
Thank you, Eleanor Michael, for the following--
ReplyDeleteWell-written poem creates a rhythm of its own.
Thank you, John Williams, for the following--
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed your poem--your thoughts grow in a river's flow, through valleys of the mind.
Robert, Marianne, Jack, Gerald, Eleanor and John,
ReplyDeleteThank you all for your inspired comments. It means a lot to this poet.
Your friend,
David Fox
Thank you, John Polselli, for the following--
ReplyDeleteHi David. Your poem expresses your love of nature, and how nature and art are synonymous. Exquisitely done!
Thank you, Richard Sponaugle, for the following--
ReplyDeleteShort and sweet, speaks volumes with minimal words. Reminds me of devices I sue for inspiration.
Thank you, Barbara Siekierski, for the following--
ReplyDeleteA writer writing poetry in a cafe perhaps with friends sitting at a table with him maybe giving him ideas to what to write about.