the wild one
By Peggy Dugan French & ayaz daryl nielsen
within a shallow night
the wind shifted softly
hidden, snug and sheltered
the wild one slept soundly
time-spawned storyteller
weaving a magic tale
of those who live for others
warming decades of hearts
the souls of storyteller magic,
enhancing the world forever . . .
Peggy and ayaz,
ReplyDeleteWhat a great collaboration you two have produced here. Sorry I almost missed this!
Your friend,
David Fox
Thank you David, glad you enjoyed it! Peggy
Deleteand my thanks, also!
DeleteLoving this shout out to the classic story tellers. Very much appreciative of your mutual efforts.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Michael, means a lot to hear these words!
Deletemuch appreciated!
DeleteLoving this shout out to the classic story tellers. Very much appreciative of your mutual efforts.
ReplyDelete(Peggy wrote it) (and, thanks)
DeleteEnjoyed it!
ReplyDeleteThanks!
Deletegood!
Deletejust splendid
ReplyDeleteThank you!
Deleteawesome!
DeleteThank you Peggy & Ayaz for your collaboration. Nice poem! Good wishes, Chris~
ReplyDeleteThanks Chris, glad you enjoyed it!
Deleteespecially appreciating Peggy's contribution to this poem. . .
ReplyDeletethanks ayaz, but it took both of us!
DeleteYou both have written a magnificent and remarkable write. I am so very impressed by your talented quills writing up such a tremendous poem. What a great piece, awesome work,
ReplyDeleteRussell
Thanks Russell, really appreciate your words and so glad you liked the piece!
Deletethank you, Rusty!
DeleteThoroughly enjoyed it. Thanks for writing and sharing this.
ReplyDeleteThank you Barbara!
Deleteme, too, thank you!
DeleteLove the first line of the poem and its contrast to how night is often expressed. It dragged me in and held me to the marvelous end. Thanks!
ReplyDeletethank you! Peggy wrote the first line. . .
DeleteThanks for your comments Michael!
ReplyDeleteLovely imagery! Thank you of sharing!
ReplyDeletebest to your day!
DeleteThanks for your comment!
DeleteWhat an enchanting poem, Peggy and ayaz daryl!
ReplyDeleteThanks Marianne!
Deletesincerest thank you!
ReplyDeletelove this - you work wonderfully together
ReplyDeleteThanks Jack!
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