Sunday, July 19, 2015

Special Feature Collaborative Poem--By Peggy Dugan French & ayaz daryl nielsen--United States

the wild one

By Peggy Dugan French & ayaz daryl nielsen

within a shallow night
the wind shifted softly
hidden, snug and sheltered
the wild one slept soundly
time-spawned storyteller
weaving a magic tale
of those who live for others
warming decades of hearts
the souls of storyteller magic,
enhancing the world forever . . .

35 comments:

  1. Peggy and ayaz,
    What a great collaboration you two have produced here. Sorry I almost missed this!
    Your friend,
    David Fox

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    1. Thank you David, glad you enjoyed it! Peggy

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    2. and my thanks, also!

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  2. Loving this shout out to the classic story tellers. Very much appreciative of your mutual efforts.

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    1. Thanks a lot Michael, means a lot to hear these words!

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    2. much appreciated!

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  3. Loving this shout out to the classic story tellers. Very much appreciative of your mutual efforts.

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    1. (Peggy wrote it) (and, thanks)

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  4. Thank you Peggy & Ayaz for your collaboration. Nice poem! Good wishes, Chris~

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  5. especially appreciating Peggy's contribution to this poem. . .

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  6. You both have written a magnificent and remarkable write. I am so very impressed by your talented quills writing up such a tremendous poem. What a great piece, awesome work,

    Russell

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    1. Thanks Russell, really appreciate your words and so glad you liked the piece!

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    2. thank you, Rusty!

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  7. Thoroughly enjoyed it. Thanks for writing and sharing this.

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  8. Love the first line of the poem and its contrast to how night is often expressed. It dragged me in and held me to the marvelous end. Thanks!

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    1. thank you! Peggy wrote the first line. . .

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  9. Thanks for your comments Michael!

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  10. Lovely imagery! Thank you of sharing!

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  11. What an enchanting poem, Peggy and ayaz daryl!

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  12. sincerest thank you!

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  13. love this - you work wonderfully together

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