Thursday, July 23, 2015

Tanka--By ayaz daryl nielsen--United States

this tenderness
scampers on
ahead of me
your door opens
before I arrive

ayaz daryl nielsen, x-roughneck (as on oil rigs)/hospice nurse, editor of bear creek haiku (26+ years/127+ issues), homes for poems include Lilliput Review, SCIFAIKUEST, New Verse News, Shamrock, Kind of a Hurricane, and! online at: bear creek haiku poetry, poems and info

14 comments:

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    1. thank you, Marianne - best to your day, my friend. . .

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  2. This is an tender poem here. I thought you have written such a splendid write, what a grandiose piece, great work,

    Russell

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  3. Enjoyed your tender piece of writing. A joy! Ralph

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  4. Nice write, ayaz. Thank you for sharing and continued blessings!

    -MJ (www.tgbtgpublictions.com)

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  5. ayaz, what a wonderful and well written poem. Thank you for once again sharing your talent.
    Charlene

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