Thursday, July 23, 2015

Tanka--By ayaz daryl nielsen--United States

this tenderness
scampers on
ahead of me
your door opens
before I arrive

ayaz daryl nielsen, x-roughneck (as on oil rigs)/hospice nurse, editor of bear creek haiku (26+ years/127+ issues), homes for poems include Lilliput Review, SCIFAIKUEST, New Verse News, Shamrock, Kind of a Hurricane, and! online at: bear creek haiku poetry, poems and info
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13 comments:

  1. pdfrenchJuly 23, 2015 at 3:27 PM

    I love this! Great job!

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  2. Marianne SzlykJuly 23, 2015 at 8:38 PM

    Very touching, too!

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    1. AnonymousJuly 25, 2015 at 7:37 PM

      thank you, Marianne - best to your day, my friend. . .

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  3. UnknownJuly 23, 2015 at 10:23 PM

    This is an tender poem here. I thought you have written such a splendid write, what a grandiose piece, great work,

    Russell

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  4. UnknownJuly 24, 2015 at 11:57 PM

    Enjoyed your tender piece of writing. A joy! Ralph

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  5. UnknownJuly 25, 2015 at 10:03 AM

    lovely

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  6. AnonymousJuly 25, 2015 at 7:35 PM

    sure like this poet. . . Frosty

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  7. AnonymousJuly 25, 2015 at 7:35 PM

    thank you, Kelley (two times over)

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  8. AnonymousJuly 31, 2015 at 7:43 AM

    Nice write, ayaz. Thank you for sharing and continued blessings!

    -MJ (www.tgbtgpublictions.com)

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  9. CharleneAugust 3, 2015 at 8:18 PM

    ayaz, what a wonderful and well written poem. Thank you for once again sharing your talent.
    Charlene

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