Christmas Morning
In the pale glint of dawn, a
hawk darts
across the marsh. I wash
dishes from last night’s supper.
Coffee gurgles, filling the
glass carafe.
Alone at this hour, husband
and children still asleep,
I breathe in peace—my hands
deep in warm suds,
china and silver soaking
amidst the bursts of bubbles,
their reflections tinged
pink.
Outside a streak of mauve
swirls and widens
over the pond, feathery as
angel wings
on childhood holy cards. The
sun paints
peach hibiscus, dusty blue
asters, chrysanthemums,
yellow and spiky—all
sprouting from the dark
of December like the star
that once glowed
in Bethlehem.
Mary Jo Balistreri has two
books of poetry published by Bellowing Ark Press and a chapbook by Tiger's Eye
Press. She has more recently been enjoying learning and writing haiku type
poems. She finds it helps her see differently and experience life in a new way.
For more information, please visit her at maryjobalistreripoet.com
Jo,
ReplyDeleteI've found you--like, "Coffee gurgles, filling the glass carafe."
Your poems put me there! Can see myself on Christmas morning relaxing with steaming coffee, perhaps a pastry, enjoying the moment.
Thank you.
Michael
Thank you Michael. Appreciate your comment.
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could work well as a haibun best wishes angelee
beautifully descriptive
ReplyDeleteReally loved your piece, can certainly picture myself in a similar scene a few short days from now. Merry Christmas and thanks for sharing
ReplyDeleteJo, I loved the way you slowly entered the poem. Then a burst of bubbles and a streak of mauve swirls. The sun paints peach, blue and yellow flowers all spouting from the dark of December. Your last line brings light and dark together with a star over Bethlehem. -Beautiful ending.
ReplyDeleteThank you everyone for your kind comments. It feels so good to hear from you.
ReplyDeleteHappy Holidays to all.
And to you jo
ReplyDeleteyou go, Jo! Happy New Year!
ReplyDeleteHi daryl,
ReplyDeleteThanks so much.
So lovely! I love how you bring in the hawk and later how you depict the sunrise.
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