Tan Renga--
Barbara
Tate, Winchester TN
Karen
O'Leary, West Fargo, ND
dementia
pointing
the finger
at
phantom pain
her
eyes sparkle
as
she calls my name
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Barbara
Tate, Winchester, TN
Karen
O'Leary, West Fargo, ND
thunderbird
the
distant growl
of a
coming storm
dad's
slurred voice roars
outside
the door
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Editor’s
note—It was such a joy
to
work with Barbara on these
Tan
Renga. Thank you, Barbara,
for
all you do for our Whispers
community.
What are the odds, I was listening to Glen Campbell when I happened upon this collaboration...
ReplyDeleteA perfect measure of simpatico, Barbara & Karen, both enlightening and engaging.
Dear Michael,
DeleteThank you so much, my friend. What a joy to have you back at Whispers. Barbara was the inspiration for these poems. I enjoyed the endeavor.
Blessings,
Karen
Thank you. This has truly made my day. It is an honor to work with Karen and hope for an inspirational and creative '16.
Deletelove this heartfelt write - great work, both of you xx
ReplyDeleteDear Jack,
DeleteThank you so much, my friend. I'm glad you enjoyed our poems. I appreciate all you do for our writing community.
Blessings,
Karen
I feel honored. Thank you
DeleteBarbara and Karen,
ReplyDeleteThese are quite good. Did Barbara write the first 3 lines and you came up with the other two, in these Karen? Great poems.
Your friend,
David Fox
Dear David,
DeleteYou are correct. Thank you so much for your kind words. It was fun working on these with Barbara.
Blessings,
Karen
Love the collaborative ties that bind on this piece...nice job to both!
DeleteDear Ken,
DeleteWhat an encouraging voice your are here at Whispers. Thank you so much for your kind thoughts.
Blessings,
Karen
I am so blessed to have found Whispers. Everyone's friendship means more than I can say.
DeleteThank you so much for your kind words, Barbara. I'm so glad you found Whispers, too.
DeleteBlessings,
Karen
Quite an interesting collaboration. I really liked the picturesque way the two were tied together. Great job Barbara and Karen.
ReplyDeleteLove, Charlene.
Dear Charlene,
DeleteThank you so much for your lovely comments, my friend. What a joy to have you at Whispers, sharing the gift of words.
Blessings,
Karen
Thank you. Am looking forward to '16.
DeleteDear Barbara and dear Karen,
ReplyDeleteliked what you wrote,best always,angelee
Dear Angelee,
DeleteThank you so much for your kind words, my friend. I appreciate the light that you are here at Whispers and in the writing community at large.
Blessings,
Karen
Thank you
DeleteI don't know who said heartfelt, but it is what I felt. Let me scroll up--thanks Jack--it is exactly that. Collaborations are wonderful ways to work with others and inspire each other.
ReplyDeleteWay to go Barbara and Karen. Thank you.
Dear Mary Jo,
DeleteHeartfelt means a lot to me as it is always a joy to know that one's writing enables others to feel some connection. Thank you for your kind words.
Blessings,
Karen
Thank you. I feel the same way as Karen. "Heartfelt" means so much.
DeleteYes, this is a wonderful, inspired collaboration. I think that you work well together!
ReplyDeleteDear Marianne,
DeleteThank you so much. I hope we can collaborate on more pieces in the new year as Barbara is talented and fun to work with. I appreciate your kind words.
Blessings,
Karen
Thank you. I'll hold Karen to that. She writes some good strong lines. I'll be looking forward to it.
DeleteOh, these are brilliant! Love the anomalies!
ReplyDeleteTruly made my day!!
DeleteDear Sheika,
ReplyDeleteWow! I thank you so much for your zealous review. Your words sure brought a smile to my face. It was a pleasure working with Barbara on these poems.
Blessings,
Karen
These are truly lovely. - Laura M Kaminski
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Laura! Barbara was the inspiration for these poems. It was a joy working with her.
DeleteBlessings,
Karen
Thank you, Andrea Dietrich, for the following--
ReplyDeletevery nice. I enjoyed your work in that form.
Thank you, Andrea, for you kind words. Barbara was the inspiration--I kind of tagged along. It was fun working on these with her. Glad you enjoyed them.
DeleteBlessings,
Karen
Thank you but Karen wrote the truly strong lines and brought the whole thing together.
DeleteThank you so much for your kind words, Barbara. What a treat to work with you.
DeleteKaren
Loved these two Renga. Thank you for this inspiring writing.
ReplyDeleteNalini Priyadarshni
Dear Nalini,
DeleteThank you for your kind words. It is such a pleasure to have you a part of the Whispers community.
Blessings,
Karen
I simply loved both of them, they touched a raw nerve.
ReplyDeleteDear Raamesh,
DeleteThank you so much for your thoughtful words. It was fun working on these with Barbara. I appreciate your ongoing support.
Blessings,
Karen
wel done!
ReplyDeleteThanks ayaz! What a gift you are to the writing community. I really appreciate your encouragement and support.
DeleteBlessings,
Karen
I could feel the heart break of dementia in these..Sara
DeleteDear Sara,
DeleteIt is important that the poetry conveys meaning so your comment is greatly appreciated by me. Thank you for your ongoing support and encouragement.
Blessings,
Karen